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Threads - Script - By Shanthanu Gnanasekar

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Written By: Shanthanu Gnanasekar

Category: Script Writing

Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

In the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026, Shanthanu Gnanasekar presents "Threads," a compelling script exploring the intricacies of teenage identity, emotion, and existential crises. This work delves into the narrative potential of a non-linear, hyperlink film format, showcasing Gnanasekar's innovative approach to storytelling. The script intricately weaves mixed cinematic styles to portray the complexities and invisible connections that define the teenage experience.

About the Work

"Threads" captures the delicate and tumultuous journey of adolescence with a poignant blend of melancholy and hope. Shanthanu Gnanasekar utilizes rich imagery and varied narrative techniques to explore themes of love, loss, and self-discovery. The script's mood oscillates between introspective solitude and vibrant companionship, reflecting the multifaceted nature of youth. Gnanasekar's adept use of dialogue and visual storytelling invites readers to ponder the intricate web of relationships and experiences that shape one's identity.

Threads - Script

Original Submission by Shanthanu Gnanasekar

Threads

Written by

Shanthanu Gnanasekar

Based on the EPQ question: "To what extent can a non-linear, hyperlink film effectively explore teenage identity, emotion, and existential crisis through mixed cinematic styles?"

FADE IN:

EXT. WALL - DAY

QUIET GIRL (16), plays a ukulele. Her fingers move across with deliberate slowness.

She plays a melancholic melody.

The camera slowly circles her, maintaining the stillness of the composition.

CUT TO:

INT. JISHIN'S BEDROOM - MORNING

JISHIN (16), dark hair falling over his eyes, sits on the floor with his back on the wall. We then cut to Jishin sitting at a small wooden desk. Notebooks scattered around him, some with torn pages. He writes with intensity, occasionally pausing to stare out the window.

JISHIN (V.O.)

(reading his poem, voice

raw with emotion)

We broke up on April Fool's day, so

I took it as a joke.

He scratches out a line, frustrated.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

She was the summer I never wanted

to end... and I was the autumn that

came anyway."

On his desk: a small photo of GRACE (16), beautiful, laughing. Jishin's fingers trace the edge of the photo.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Grace. Even her name sounds like a

poem I'll never be good enough to

write.

Thunder rumbles outside. Rain begins to tap against the window.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Maybe that's what heartbreak is -

being left with all these half finished poems about someone who's

already moved on to the next story.

2.

He closes the notebook and leans back in his chair, watching the rain.

CUT TO:

GOLDEN HOUR FLASHBACKS - "MY KIND OF WOMAN" BY MAC DEMARCO BEGINS

A series of beautiful, hazy memories:

EXT. SCHOOL COURTYARD - FLASHBACK

Jishin and Grace walking together, her hand brushing his. She laughs at something he's said.

EXT. ESPACE - FLASHBACK

They watch the view, sharing earbuds. Grace rests her head on Jishin's shoulder as waves crash in the distance.

INT. LIBRARY - FLASHBACK

Grace writes in Jishin's notebook, sticking her tongue out in concentration. He watches her with complete adoration.

JISHIN (V.O.)

(over montage)

I used to think I understood love.

Thought it was just... two people

who fit together like puzzle

pieces.

EXT. PARK - FLASHBACK

They're on swings, going back and forth in sync. Grace jumps off mid-swing and lands Gracefully. Jishin tries to follow and stumbles, making her laugh.

JISHIN (V.O.)

But love isn't a puzzle. It's more

like... catching lightning in your

hands. Beautiful and impossible and

it always burns you in the end.

The montage slows, becomes more melancholic. We see them sitting further apart, conversations that look strained.

3.

INT. HALLWAY - FLASHBACK

Grace walks past Jishin without acknowledging him. He watches her go, devastated.

The music fades as we return to:

INT. JISHIN'S BEDROOM - PRESENT

Jishin stares at the blank page in front of him.

JISHIN (V.O.)

And now I'm left writing poems to

the ghost of what we used to be.

CUT TO:

INT. SCHOOL CLASSROM - DAY

The room is empty except for Jishin, Tommy and Mike.

A Twin Peaks track is playing play. They start dancing. Not well but just freely, like no one’s watching. The camera watches from above, static and distant.

The scene lasts thirty seconds and the aim is for it to be awkward, hypnotic, kind of beautiful.

FADE OUT.

INT. SCHOOL BENCHES - DAY

Jishin sits with his friends: TOMMY (16), energetic with wild curly hair, and MIKE (16), quieter, always eating something. They're at a table covered in lunch trays and crumpled papers.

TOMMY

(mouth full of sandwich)

Dude, remember when you first met

Grace? In this exact area?

MIKE

Oh man, that was peak goofiness.

JISHIN

(defensive but smiling

slightly)

It wasn't that bad.

4.

TOMMY

Bro, you literally walked into a

wall.

JISHIN

I was distracted!

FLASHBACK WITHIN FLASHBACK:

INT. SCHOOL BENCHES - THREE MONTHS AGO

Jishin walks through the cafeteria carrying a box of food. He spots Grace sitting alone, reading a book. Everything slows down.

JISHIN (V.O.)

(from present)

Okay, so I saw her sitting there,

reading! and I thought, "This is

it. This is my moment.

Young Jishin approaches her table confidently.

YOUNG JISHIN

(trying to be smooth)

Pretty heavy lunch reading huh.

GRACE

(looking up, amused)

Hmm... yeah

Jishin, takes a step backward to seem casual and walks directly into a support pillar and trips.

GRACE (CONT'D)

(standing up, concerned

but still laughing)

Oh my god, are you okay?

YOUNG JISHIN

(trying to maintain

dignity)

Totally. This is just...

performance art. It was about the

chaos of modern teenage existence.

GRACE

(grinning)

Well, it's certainly absurd.

She helps him clean up. Their hands touch as they both reach for the same napkin.

5.

BACK TO PRESENT:

INT. SCHOOL BENCHES - DAY

TOMMY

And she still said yes when you

asked her out!

MIKE

That's true love right there. Love

at first disaster.

JISHIN

(wistful)

Yeah... maybe disaster was a

warning sign I should have paid

attention to.

An awkward silence falls over the table.

TOMMY

(trying to lighten the

mood)

Hey, you know what? Forget about

her, man. There are other girls.

Like that quiet girl who plays the

ukulele.

JISHIN

What quiet girl?

MIKE

You know, dark hair, always writing

in that notebook. She's actually

really pretty if you look.

JISHIN

I don't really look.

TOMMY

Maybe you should start.

CUT TO:

EXT. PARK - DAY

Quiet Girl sits alone on a bench, legs dangling over the edge. She writes in her diary, occasionally pausing to watch students below in the courtyard.

6.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.)

(diary narration)

Sometimes I watch people... and

wonder what it would be like to be

part of their stories instead of

just... observing them.

She watches Jishin and his friends below, though we don't see them clearly from this distance.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

There's this boy who always looks

like he's carrying the weight of

the world in his backpack. I see

him in the hallways sometimes. He

has sad eyes.

She turns to a fresh page in her diary.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

I wonder if sad people recognize

each other. Like some kind of

secret language written in the way

we walk, the way we sit alone.

A gentle breeze flips the pages of her diary. She catches them, revealing previous entries filled with small sketches and poetry.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Maybe loneliness isn't something to

be cured. Maybe it's just...

another way of seeing the world.

Like switching to black and white

film - you notice different things.

She closes the diary and stands up, looking out over the city.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

But sometimes... sometimes I think

it would be nice to try color

again.

CUT TO:

EXT. SCHOOL PARKING LOT - DAY

A group of students stand around talking. The atmosphere builds with whispered conversations:

7.

STUDENT 1

(hushed, dramatic)

They say he controls half the

school's underground economy.

STUDENT 2

I heard he once made a kid

disappear for a whole weekend.

STUDENT 3

My cousin's friend saw him driving

a white van with tinted windows.

The camera slowly zooms in on their faces, building mysterious tension.

STUDENT 1

They call him... The Don.

Suddenly, epic music begins. The camera swirls dramatically as we see a silhouette approaching through the parking lot.

STUDENT 2

(whispering)

He's coming.

Tommy and Mike are mid-conversation when the sound of Mexican salsa music blasts from nowhere.

And then we see:

KRITHIC (16), wearing a suit and dark sunglasses, carrying a burrito in one hand and a smoothie in the other. The camera follows him in slow motion as he emerges from behind a row of cars. He's trying very hard to look intimidating but mostly looks like a kid playing dress-up.

He stops in front of a very cool white van.

KRITHIC

(deep voice, trying to

sound menacing)

Time to handle some... business.

He opens the sliding door of the minivan. It makes a horrible squeaking sound.

KRITHIC (CONT'D)

(still trying to maintain

his image)

My... uh... mobile headquarters.

He gets in the passengers seat. The van makes several concerning noises before starting.

8.

As his driver and him drives away, we hear him playing extremely loud hip-hop music. The van backfires.

The students watch in confused silence.

That's it?

STUDENT 3 STUDENT 1

(still trying to maintain

the mystery)

That's just what he wants you to

think.

CUT TO:

INT. KRITHIC'S VAN - DAY

Inside the van, Krithic talks into a toy walkie-talkie.

KRITHIC

(into walkie-talkie)

This is Don Krithic reporting to

base. The eagles are flying south

today. Repeat: the eagles are

flying south.

Static response. Then:

VOICE ON RADIO

(his mom)

Krithic, honey, you need to pick up

milk on the way home.

KRITHIC

(breaking character

momentarily)

I told you not to call me when I'm

doing business, Ma!

VOICE ON RADIO

And don't forget your retainer is

on the kitchen counter.

Krithic quickly turns off the radio, embarrassed. He adjusts his rearview mirror and practices his intimidating face.

KRITHIC

(to himself)

You got this, man. You're a boss. A

kingpin. A...

He notices his "Baby on Board" sign in the rear window.

9.

KRITHIC (CONT'D)

(muttering)

Gotta get rid of that.

EXT. PARK - DAY

The van pulls up to a park where Jishin, Tommy, and Mike are hanging out on picnic tables.

TOMMY

(looking at the van)

Who's that?

MIKE

I think that's the guy everyone's

been talking about.

Krithic steps out of the van, straightening his suit jacket. He approaches them with exaggerated swagger. As he walks he trips, but quickly gets up.

KRITHIC

(trying to sound tough)

I hear you boys have been...

talking about certain people.

JISHIN

(confused)

What people?

KRITHIC

People in... positions of

influence. People who might not

appreciate their names being thrown

around carelessly.

TOMMY

(whispering to Mike)

What is he talking about?

KRITHIC

(getting flustered)

Look, just... be careful what you

say, okay? This is a warning. A

friendly warning. From a friend.

Who's warning you.

MIKE

Are you okay, man?

10.

KRITHIC

(trying to recover his

intimidating persona)

Just... watch yourselves.

He walks back to his van with attempted menace, but trips slightly on a stick. He quickly gets in the van and drives away, honking the horn aggressively.

The three friends watch him go.

JISHIN

That was weird.

TOMMY

Kind of sad, actually.

MIKE

Should we be worried?

JISHIN

About what? Getting run over by a

soccer mom van?

They all laugh, but there's something almost endearing about Krithic's earnest attempt at intimidation.

CUT TO:

INT. JISHIN'S BEDROOM - EVENING

[DIMMER LIGHTING, MORE MELANCHOLIC]

Jishin lies on his bed, staring at the ceiling. His notebook is open beside him, but the page remains blank. Rain continues outside.

JISHIN (V.O.)

Day thirty-seven since she said we

needed "space." I've been counting.

He sits up and looks at himself in the mirror across the room.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Everyone keeps saying I should

"move on." As if heartbreak was

just another homework assignment

you could finish and forget about.

He picks up his guitar and strums a few melancholic chords.

11.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

But some songs don't have endings.

Some poems don't have last lines.

Some stories just... stop, and

leave you wondering what you did

wrong.

A montage of Jishin's daily routine, all tinged with sadness:

- Walking through school hallways, head down

- Sitting alone at lunch while Tommy and Mike try to cheer him up

- Staring out the window during classes

- Writing half-finished poems and crossing them out

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

The worst part isn't missing her.

It's missing who I was when I was

with her. That version of myself

who was funny and confident and

knew what to say.

INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT

Jishin brushes his teeth, but catches his reflection looking tired, older somehow.

JISHIN (V.O.)

Now I'm just... this. Whatever this

is. A rough draft of a person,

waiting for someone to come back

and finish writing me.

He turns off the light and the screen goes dark.

CUT TO:

EXT. SUBURBAN STREETS - NIGHT

Quiet Girl walks slowly through empty neighbourhood streets. Streetlights create pools of light and shadow. She carries her diary tucked under her arm.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.)

I take these walks when the world

gets too loud. Even when it's

quiet, sometimes the silence of

everyone else is louder than any

noise.

She passes houses with lit windows, glimpsing fragments of other people's lives.

12.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Everyone seems to know exactly who

they are and where they're going.

Like they all got some instruction

manual for being sixteen that I

missed.

She stops at a bus stop and sits on the bench, even though no buses run this late.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

I keep waiting for my life to start

feeling like mine instead of like

I'm just... visiting it.

A cat approaches her. She reaches out tentatively, and it lets her pet it.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Maybe that's why I write everything

down. To prove I was here. To prove

any of this was real.

She opens her diary and writes by the light of the streetlamp:

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

"Tonight I talked to a cat. It was

the longest conversation I've had

all week."

She laughs softly at her own joke.

CUT TO:

EXT. PARK - MORNING

Quiet Girl plays the ukelele again, the same melancholic melody from the opening sitting on a bench. But this time, the camera reveals that she overlooks the courtyard where Jishin and his friends eat lunch.

She glances out the window while playing and sees them below. Her playing falters for a moment as she watches Jishin, who looks particularly dejected today.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.)

The sad boy is there again. I

wonder what his story is.

She continues playing.

13.

EXT. COURTYARD - SAME TIME

Jishin sits with Tommy and Mike, but he's not really participating in their conversation. Faintly, we hear ukulele music.

JISHIN

(looking up towards the

bench)

Do you guys hear that?

Hear what?

TOMMY JISHIN

Music. It's beautiful.

MIKE

Oh yeah, that's been happening every morning for weeks. Some girl practicing.

JISHIN

It sounds... sad. But like, beautifully sad.

TOMMY

Maybe you should go check it out.

Maybe.

JISHIN

But he doesn't move. Instead, he opens his notebook and begins writing, inspired by the music floating down from above.

JISHIN (V.O.)

"There's music in this sadness... A

melody that understands... What

words never could..."

The music and his voice-over blend together, creating the first real connection between their separate worlds.

FADE TO BLACK.

INT. KRITHIC'S VAN - DAY

Krithic drives through the neighbourhood with his "crew" - three other boys who look equally uncomfortable playing gangster. They're all wearing mismatched formal attire.

14.

CREW MEMBER 1 (DANNY) (15), small and nervous, wears a bow tie.

CREW MEMBER 2 (REX) (16), tall and gangly, wears a vest that's too small.

CREW MEMBER 3 (SIMON) (15), quiet and bookish, wears thick glasses and keeps checking his watch.

KRITHIC

(into his toy walkie talkie)

Alpha Team to Base. We're

approaching the target location for

Operation... uh...

DANNY

(whispering)

You never told us what we're doing.

KRITHIC

(still into walkie-talkie)

Operation Respect BUSS.

SIMON

(adjusting his glasses)

That's not a real operation name.

KRITHIC

(breaking character)

Look, can you guys just... try to

be intimidating for like five

minutes?

REX

I feel ridiculous.

KRITHIC

You look great. Very menacing.

DANNY

My mom made me wear this bow tie

because she said if I'm going to

play pretend, I should at least

look nice.

KRITHIC

(frustrated)

It's not pretend! We're building a

reputation!

SIMON

For what? Driving around in a

minivan wearing our dads' clothes?

15.

KRITHIC

(pulling over)

Okay, everybody out. Time for a pep

talk.

EXT. EMPTY PARKING LOT - CONTINUOUS

The four boys stand in a circle next to the van. Krithic tries to be inspirational.

KRITHIC

Gentlemen, we are not just boys

pretending to be men. We are

entrepreneurs! Visionaries! The

future leaders of... something

important!

DANNY

What exactly are we the leaders of?

KRITHIC

(pause, then with

conviction)

The underground economy of...

friendship. And respect. And...

candy sales.

REX

Candy sales?

KRITHIC

I brought Fun Size Snickers. For

intimidation purposes.

He opens the van and reveals boxes of Halloween candy.

SIMON

Krithic, it's March.

KRITHIC

Candy is timeless, Simon. Fear is

timeless.

DANNY

Are we going to threaten people

with chocolate bars?

KRITHIC

(getting defensive)

It's about the implication! The

psychological impact!

The other boys exchange glances.

16.

REX

You know what? I'm actually kind of

hungry.

They all start eating the candy. The "gang meeting" turns into an impromptu snack break.

KRITHIC

(sighing)

This is not how Tony Soprano would

have handled this.

CUT TO:

EXT. PARK - DAY

Jishin, Tommy, and Mike are hanging out at their usual spot, playing frisbee and generally enjoying a rare moment when Jishin seems almost happy.

TOMMY

See? Fresh air, physical activity,

vitamin D. This is exactly what you

need.

JISHIN

(catching the frisbee)

Yeah, actually, I do feel a little

better.

MIKE

Maybe we should start a "get Jishin

out of his room" campaign.

JISHIN

(smiling genuinely for the

first time)

You guys are ridiculous. But

thanks.

Suddenly, the minivan screeches into the parking lot. Dramatic music begins playing from the van's speakers.

TOMMY

(pointing)

It's that weird kid again.

The van doors slide open and Krithic's "gang" emerges. They're all wearing sunglasses now and trying to walk in sync, but they keep bumping into each other.

17.

KRITHIC

(through a voice modulator

toy that makes his voice

sound robotic)

Attention, targets. You have been

selected for... recruitment.

JISHIN

(confused)

Recruitment for what?

KRITHIC

(still using the voice

modulator)

That is classified information.

DANNY

(whispering loudly)

Should we tie them up now?

KRITHIC

(dropping the voice

modulator)

Danny! We discussed this!

REX

(to the three friends)

Look, we're really sorry about

this, but we need you to come with

us.

Why?

MIKE

SIMON

(checking his notes)

It says here we're supposed to "establish dominance through strategic inconvenience."

TOMMY

Did you write that down?

SIMON

Krithic dictated it. I take very good notes.

JISHIN

(starting to laugh)

Are you guys seriously trying to kidnap us?

18.

KRITHIC

(trying to regain control)

It's not kidnapping! It's...

involuntary hanging out!

The absurdity of the situation hits everyone at once. Even Krithic's crew starts giggling.

DANNY

(to his teammates)

Should we be using the rope now?

He pulls out what appears to be jump rope.

REX

That's not rope, Danny. That's your

mom's jump rope.

DANNY

She said I could borrow it!

MIKE

(to Jishin and Tommy)

Should we run?

TOMMY

I kind of want to see where this

goes.

JISHIN

(genuinely curious)

Yeah, me too.

KRITHIC

(realizing his

"kidnapping" has turned

into a social situation)

So... you'll come willingly?

JISHIN

Sure. What do you want to show us?

KRITHIC

(deflating slightly)

Well, when you put it like that, it

sounds kind of lame.

CUT TO:

INT. KRITHIC'S VAN - DAY

All seven boys are now crammed into the minivan. It's clearly not designed for this many teenagers.

19.

Mike is practically sitting on top of Tommy, and Jishin is wedged between Rex and Simon.

TOMMY

(looking around the van)

Is that a car seat?

KRITHIC

(defensive)

My little brother sometimes rides

with me.

The van hits a pothole and everyone bounces around. A box of the Halloween candy spills everywhere.

MIKE

(picking up a Snickers

bar)

Can I have one of these?

KRITHIC

(sighing)

Go ahead.

Soon everyone is eating candy and the atmosphere becomes genuinely friendly.

REX

So what's your story, man? You

always look super sad at school.

JISHIN

(surprised by the direct

question)

Oh. Girlfriend broke up with me.

DANNY

That sucks.

SIMON

How long were you together?

JISHIN

Three months. But it felt like...

longer.

TOMMY

He's been writing poetry about it.

KRITHIC

(interested)

Poetry? That's actually pretty

cool.

20.

JISHIN

You think so?

KRITHIC

Yeah! I tried to write a rap about

being misunderstood, but it mostly

just rhymed "respect" with

"inspect" and "neglect."

Everyone laughs.

MIKE

Where are we going, anyway?

KRITHIC

(realizing he never

actually planned this

part)

Uh... I honestly didn't think this

far ahead.

CUT TO:

INT. JISHIN'S BEDROOM - EVENING

Jishin is back in his room, alone with his thoughts. The brief happiness from the afternoon has faded.

JISHIN (V.O.)

It's funny how you can laugh for a

few hours and forget you're

supposed to be heartbroken. But

then you come home and the sadness

is still there, waiting for you

like a loyal dog.

He looks at his phone, scrolling through old messages with Grace. He starts to type several times but deletes everything.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

I keep writing these messages I'll

never send. Apologies for things

I'm not sure I did wrong. Love

letters to someone who's already

reading someone else's.

He opens his notebook and continues writing his poem.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

The ocean doesn’t apologize for

drowning you. It just keeps being

the vast ocean that it is.

(MORE)

21.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Maybe I should learn to stop

apologizing for feeling so much.

He pauses, stares at the page the pen still in his hand, unmoving. He moves to the wall and sits down with a bottle.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

(softly)

Sometimes… I just feel so lost.

VISUAL — UNDERWATER

Jishin floats beneath the surface, fully clothed. Sound fades to a low, distant hum.

Light ripples across his face as he slowly drifts downward, suspended between calm and collapse.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Lost trying to sound like I know

who I am. Maybe it’s okay not to

know yet. Lost trying to sound like

I know who I am. Maybe it’s okay

not to know yet.

BACK TO: INT. JISHIN’S ROOM – NIGHT

He is still sitting down on the floor. He starts to drink from the bottle.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

But what if loving too much is the

only way I know how to love?

MONTAGE - Jishin'S NIGHTLY ROUTINE OF SADNESS:

- Staring at the photo of Grace

- Playing sad songs on his guitar

- Looking out the window at the rain

- Writing and crossing out lines of poetry

- Lying in bed, unable to sleep

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Everyone says heartbreak gets

easier. But they don't tell you

that some nights it gets harder.

Some nights it feels like your

chest is full of ocean water and

you can't remember how to breathe

air.

CUT TO:

22.

EXT. BUS STOP - SUNSET

[BLACK & WHITE, GOLDEN HOUR TRANSLATED TO GRAYSCALE]

Quiet Girl sits alone at the bus stop, even though several buses have come and gone.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.)

I come here when I need to think.

There's something about watching

people get on and off buses, going

to places I'll never see, living

lives I'll never know.

A businessman in a suit gets on a bus, looking exhausted.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

That man probably has a family

waiting for him. Maybe kids who

will run to the door when they hear

his key in the lock.

An elderly woman with a shopping bag sits down next to Quiet Girl, then gets on the next bus.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

She might be going to visit her

grandchildren. Or maybe she's going

somewhere completely unexpected.

Maybe she's running away to start a

new life at seventy-five.

A teenage girl around Quiet Girl's age gets off a bus, talking excitedly on her phone.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

And she... she's probably telling

her best friend about something

amazing that happened today. Some

small perfect moment that made

everything worth it.

Quiet Girl opens her diary and writes.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

I collect these moments, these

fragments of other people's

stories. Maybe if I gather enough

of them, I'll understand how to

write my own.

She looks up at the sky, where clouds are moving in interesting patterns.

23.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Sometimes I think I'm not meant to

be the main character in anybody's

story. Maybe I'm just supposed to

be the person who notices things.

Who writes them down. Who

remembers.

A bus arrives, and the doors open. Quiet Girl looks at it for a long moment, as if considering getting on and going anywhere.

But she stays seated.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

But maybe that's okay. Maybe the

world needs people who stay still

and watch. Maybe observation is its

own kind of adventure.

The bus drives away, and she's alone again.

CUT TO:

INT. KRITHIC'S GARAGE - DAY

Tommy, Mike, and Jishin are sitting in folding chairs, "tied up" with what appears to be colorful yarn. They look more amused than threatened.

TOMMY

(testing his bonds)

Is this... crafting yarn?

MIKE

It's actually really soft.

JISHIN

(to Krithic, who's pacing

in front of them wearing

his suit)

So what happens now?

KRITHIC

(trying to sound menacing)

Now... you wait.

DANNY

(whispering to Rex)

Wait for what?

24.

REX

(whispering back)

I don't think he knows.

SIMON

(checking his notes)

According to the plan, this is

Phase Three: "Psychological

Intimidation Through Suspense."

TOMMY

What was Phase Two?

SIMON

(reading)

"Drive around until someone feels

like talking."

MIKE

And Phase One?

SIMON

"Look cool."

The three friends exchange glances and try not to laugh.

KRITHIC

(overhearing)

This is serious! You're dealing

with professionals here!

JISHIN

(genuinely curious)

Krithic, can I ask you something?

KRITHIC

(suspiciously)

What?

JISHIN

What are you actually trying to

accomplish? Like, what's the end

goal here?

Krithic stops pacing. For the first time, he looks genuinely uncertain.

KRITHIC

I... I want people to take me

seriously.

TOMMY

About what?

25.

KRITHIC

About... anything. Everything. I'm

tired of being invisible.

MIKE

Dude, you're not invisible. You're

hard to miss.

KRITHIC

But nobody really sees me, you

know? They see the weird kid with

the van. The kid who tries too

hard. The kid who...

He trails off, suddenly vulnerable.

JISHIN

(gently)

The kid who what?

KRITHIC

(sitting down)

The kid who just wants to matter to

somebody.

An uncomfortable silence falls over the garage.

DANNY

(quietly)

We think you matter, Krithic.

REX

Yeah, man. You're like the most

interesting person in our grade.

SIMON

And you're definitely the only one

of us with a van.

KRITHIC

(starting to smile)

Really?

TOMMY

Can we be untied now? Not because

we're scared, but because this yarn

is making my hands itch.

KRITHIC

(laughing)

Yeah, okay.

As they start untying themselves, the mood becomes genuinely friendly.

26.

MIKE

You know, if you want people to

take you seriously, maybe you

should start with something smaller

than kidnapping.

JISHIN

Yeah, like what are you actually

good at?

KRITHIC

(thinking)

I'm really good at organizing

things and bussing. And I know

everyone in school. I can even fit

twelve people in this van if they

don't mind being cozy.

TOMMY

That's actually pretty impressive.

SIMON

We could start a party planning

business.

DANNY

Or a transportation service!

REX

"Krithic's Premium Van Experience."

KRITHIC

(getting excited)

That's... GREAT HOLY COWS.

JISHIN

See? You don't need to be a fake

gangster. You just need to be

yourself.

KRITHIC

(pause, he picks up the

script)

But what if myself isn't that

interesting?

JISHIN

(smiling sadly)

Join the club, man. Join the club.

CUT TO:

27.

EXT. ROOFTOP - LATE AFTERNOON

Quiet Girl sits on the rooftop, but this time she's not writing. She's just watching the world below. Students are leaving school, heading to their cars, their buses, their lives.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.)

I've been thinking about connection

lately. How some people seem to

create it effortlessly, like

they're speaking a language

everyone else understands

naturally.

She watches groups of friends walking together, couples holding hands, parents picking up their kids.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

And then there are people like me,

who watch from the rooftop and

wonder if we're missing some

essential piece of the human

experience.

A paper airplane suddenly lands near her feet. She picks it up and unfolds it. Written inside, in messy handwriting:

"If you're reading this, you're not as alone as you think. - A fellow rooftop visitor"

She looks around but sees no one.

She takes out her pen and writes on the other side of the paper:

"Thank you for the reminder. Sometimes I forget other people can see this view too."

She refolds it into a plane and throws it off the rooftop, watching it spiral down into the courtyard below.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Maybe loneliness isn't about being

alone. Maybe it's about forgetting

that everyone feels alone

sometimes.

She opens her diary and writes:

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

"Note to self: Throw more paper

airplanes.(MORE)

28.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Send more messages to strangers.

Trust that someone, somewhere, is

listening."

CUT TO:

EXT. SCHOOL COURTYARD - SAME TIME

Jishin walks across the courtyard, heading home. The paper airplane lands at his feet. He picks it up, curious, and reads both messages.

JISHIN (V.O.)

(reading Quiet Girl's

note)

"Thank you for the reminder.

Sometimes I forget other people can

see this view too."

He looks up toward the rooftop but doesn't see anyone.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Someone else was up there. Someone

else sees what I see.

He carefully folds the paper and puts it in his pocket.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

All this time I thought I was the

only one who felt like I was

watching life instead of living it.

As he walks home, his pace is lighter. For the first time in weeks, he's not thinking about Grace.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Maybe heartbreak isn't the only

story worth telling. Maybe there

are other kinds of connection

waiting to be discovered.

FADE TO BLACK.

INT. KRITHIC'S GARAGE - EVENING

[WARMER LIGHTING, MORE INTIMATE FRAMING]

Krithic sits alone in his garage, still in the suit. The van sits in the background, looking less like a gangster mobile.

He's on the phone with his mom.

29.

KRITHIC

(into phone)

Ma, can I ask you something?... Why

did you give me the van?

We hear her voice faintly through the phone, warm and maternal.

KRITHIC (CONT'D)

(listening, then)

I thought it was because Dad's car

broke down... No, I get it now...

You thought I needed my own space

to figure things out.

He walks around the van, seeing it differently now.

KRITHIC (CONT'D)

(continuing conversation)

Actually, I met some cool people

today... No, Ma, I didn't kidnap

anyone. It was more like...

aggressive friendship...

He laughs at something she says.

KRITHIC (CONT'D)

Yeah, I know you raised me better

than that... Love you too.

He hangs up and looks at the van with new appreciation.

KRITHIC (CONT'D)

(to the van)

You know what? You're not a

gangster vehicle. But you're

something better.

He opens the sliding door and starts cleaning out all the fake gangster props - the toy walkie-talkies, the sunglasses, the artificial fog machine he'd been hiding in the back.

KRITHIC (CONT'D)

(continuing to talk to the

van)

You're a friend car. A road trip

car. A "let's-go-on-an-adventure"

car.

He finds a notebook and starts writing:

30.

KRITHIC (CONT'D)

"Krithic's Taxi Service: Where

every ride is an adventure, and

every passenger is a friend."

He looks up, struck by inspiration.

KRITHIC (CONT'D)

(to himself)

That's actually not bad.

EXT. JISHIN'S HOUSE - NEXT MORNING

We hear a knock at the door.

Jishin opens the door, surprised to see Krithic, in a suit.

JISHIN

Krithic? How do you know where I

live?

KRITHIC

I asked around. Don't worry, I'm

not a stalker. Mike told Tommy, who

told Danny, who told me.

JISHIN

Okay... what's up?

KRITHIC

I came to apologize for yesterday.

And to make you an offer.

An offer?

JISHIN KRITHIC

A ride to school. Free of charge. No kidnapping, just... friends giving friends rides.

JISHIN

(smiling)

That's actually really nice of you.

KRITHIC

Plus, I think you need to get out of your head for a while. And I figured out that my van is perfect for that.

How so?

JISHIN

31.

KRITHIC

(grinning)

You'll see. Go get your backpack.

CUT TO:

INT. KRITHIC'S VAN - MORNING

The van is now decorated more with colourful streamers, a small disco ball hanging from the mirror, and a sign that reads "Friendship Express."

Jishin sits in the passenger seat, looking around in amazement.

JISHIN

This is... completely different.

KRITHIC

I realized I was trying to be

someone I'm not. Turns out I'm much

better at being the fun weird kid

than the scary weird kid.

He turns on the radio. Instead of aggressive hip-hop, upbeat indie music starts playing.

KRITHIC (CONT'D)

First stop: Tommy's house. Then

Mike's. Then we're all going to

school together.

JISHIN

In a friendship van.

KRITHIC

In a friendship van.

As they drive through the neighbourhood, other students start to notice the van. Some wave. Some laugh, but in a good way.

TOMMY

(getting in the van)

Dude, this is awesome!

MIKE

(also getting in)

It's like a party on wheels!

KRITHIC

That's the idea!

32.

The van is now full of friends, all genuinely enjoying each other's company.

JISHIN

(to Krithic)

You know, you were right about

needing to get out of my head.

KRITHIC

Sometimes the best way to feel

better about your own problems is

to help someone else solve theirs.

TOMMY

What problems did you solve?

KRITHIC

I helped myself stop pretending to

be someone I'm not.

MIKE

And we helped you realize you were

already pretty cool?

Exactly.

KRITHIC JISHIN

(looking out the window)

You know, I haven't thought about Grace once this morning.

Progress!

TOMMY JISHIN

Yeah... maybe it is.

CUT TO:

INT. JISHIN'S BEDROOM - EVENING

Jishin sits at his desk, but this time he's writing with more energy. His notebook is open to a fresh page.

33.

JISHIN (V.O.)

(reading his new poem)

"I've been writing poems to ghosts

/ But maybe it's time to write to

the living / To the girl who throws

paper airplanes from rooftops / To

the boy who drives a van full of

dreams / To the part of myself

that's ready to start again."

He pauses, considering the words.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

For the first time in months, I'm

writing about hope instead of

heartbreak. About connection

instead of loss.

He looks at the paper airplane note in his pocket.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Someone else is out there, feeling

the same things I feel. Seeing the

world the same way I see it.

He continues writing:

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

"I don't know your name / But I

know your loneliness / And maybe

that's enough / To start a

conversation."

He closes the notebook and looks out his window toward the school.

JISHIN (V.O.) (CONT'D)

Tomorrow, I'm going to find the

girl who writes notes on paper

airplanes.

CUT TO:

INT. QUIET GIRL'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

[BLACK & WHITE TRANSITIONING TO SUBTLE COLOR]

Quiet Girl lies in bed, her diary open beside her. For the first time, we see her room - neat, artistic, with sketches and photos on the walls.

34.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.)

I keep thinking about that paper

airplane. About the fact that

someone found it, read it, and

wrote back.

She sits up and rereads her diary entry from earlier.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

"Note to self: Throw more paper

airplanes. Send more messages to

strangers. Trust that someone,

somewhere, is listening."

She gets out of bed and goes to her window, which overlooks the neighborhood.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

What if I stopped just observing

and started participating? What if

I stopped writing about connection

and started making it?

She takes out a fresh piece of paper and begins writing a new note:

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

"To whoever finds this: I've been

watching from the rooftop for

months, thinking I was the only one

who felt invisible. But maybe we're

all just looking for the same thing

- someone who sees us. Tomorrow,

I'll be in the music room at lunch.

If you want to stop being

strangers, come find me."

She folds it into a careful paper airplane.

QUIET GIRL (V.O.) (CONT'D)

This is either the bravest thing

I've ever done, or the most

foolish. Maybe both.

For the first time in the film, a hint of color seeps into her black and white world - just a touch of warm light on her face.

CUT TO:

"EVAPORATED" BY BEN FOLDS FIVE BEGINS

A beautifully choreographed sequence showing Jishin and Quiet Girl almost meeting throughout their school day:

35.

EXT. SCHOOL ENTRANCE - MORNING

Jishin gets out of Krithic's van just as Quiet Girl walks into school through a different entrance.

INT. SCHOOL HALLWAY - MORNING

They walk down parallel hallways, separated by one wall. They're moving at the same pace, like mirror images.

INT. LIBRARY - LUNCH TIME

Jishin sits reading at a table. Quiet Girl enters and almost approaches him, but loses her nerve and sits at a table behind a bookshelf. They're ten feet apart but might as well be worlds away.

EXT. PARK – AFTERNOON

The park is nearly empty. A few kids play basketball in the distance. Jishin walks slowly through the path, holding a crumpled note.

He looks up and spots a paper airplane gliding through the air and it lands near his feet.

He picks it up and unfolds it. Inside:

"Tomorrow, I’ll be here. Lunch time."

Tommy jogs over, out of breath, holding a bag of chips.

TOMMY

You’re not seriously going on some

paper plane date, right?

JISHIN

It’s not a date. It’s curiosity.

MIKE

That’s exactly what people say

before they fall in love.

Krithic shows up late, holding two tacos.

KRITHIC

Eyy my mamacitas, anyone want a

taco?.

They all laugh. The moment feels lighter, freer.

36.

EXT. BUS STOP - EVENING

Jishin sits at the same bus stop where Quiet Girl usually sits, but an hour later than when she's usually there.

JISHIN (V.O.)

Sometimes I feel like I'm looking

for someone I've never met, but who

I've been missing my whole life.

EXT. PARK GAZEBO – LUNCHTIME

[COLOR SLOWLY BLEEDING INTO QUIET GIRL’S BLACK & WHITE WORLD]

Quiet girl sits under a small gazebo in the park, ukulele in her lap, not playing — just waiting.

She glances at the time on her phone. Kids eat lunch on benches nearby, pigeons hover. No one comes.

She opens her diary and writes:

ARIA (V.O.)

"Maybe this was stupid. Maybe no

one actually cares about connecting

with strangers."

EXT. PATH LEADING TO THE GAZEBO – SAME TIME

Jishin walks down the park path, the original paper airplane note in hand.

Tommy and Mike trail behind him, trying to keep up.

TOMMY

You sure about this?

JISHIN

No. But I’m sure about not spending

another day wondering what if.

MIKE

What if she’s not even there?

JISHIN

Then I’ll wait. And if she doesn’t

come today, I’ll come back

tomorrow.

They reach the gazebo. Jishin stops, takes a breath.

37.

JISHIN (CONT'D)

You guys don’t have to come.

TOMMY

Are you kidding? This is the most

romantic thing that’s happened in

this town all year.

MIKE

Also, if she ghosts you, we’ll buy

you fries.

Jishin smirks, gathers his courage, and steps forward.

EXT. GAZEBO – CONTINUOUS

[FULL COLOR NOW]

Aria looks up as Jishin approaches.

For a long, awkward moment, they just look at each other — both realizing this is the person they’ve been missing without knowing it.

JISHIN

(holding up the paper

airplane)

Did you... were you the one who...?

QUIET GIRL

(softly)

You found it.

JISHIN

Actually, I found you. I’m Jishin.

QUIET GIRL

I know who you are. You write in

the courtyard. Or, well, used to.

JISHIN

And you play. Every morning. It’s

beautiful.

Tommy and Mike hang back, whispering.

TOMMY

(whispering) )

Should we leave?

MIKE

(whispering back)

Dude, obviously.

38.

They slowly retreat, leaving the two of them alone.

QUIET GIRL

I wasn’t sure anyone would come.

JISHIN

I wasn’t sure I’d have the guts to

show up.

QUIET GIRL

(smiling slightly)

But you did.

I did.

JISHIN

A beat of quiet between them.

Wind rustles through the trees.

QUIET GIRL

I write too. In my diary. Stuff

about people. Stories I make up.

JISHIN

I write poems. Mostly sad ones,

lately.

QUIET GIRL

About the girl everyone knows you

used to date?

JISHIN

(surprised)

You know about that?

QUIET GIRL

I observe people. You looked like

someone who was missing someone.

JISHIN

And you look like someone who gets what that feels like.

QUIET GIRL

Maybe we all miss people we’ve

never met yet.

That line hits Jishin like a revelation.

JISHIN

Can I... show you something I

wrote? About paper airplanes and

rooftop strangers?

39.

QUIET GIRL

Only if you let me play you the

song I wrote about someone I hoped

I’d meet someday.

JISHIN

You wrote a song about me?

QUIET GIRL

(smiling)

I wrote a song about the

possibility of you.

She strums her ukulele softly — the same melody we’ve heard throughout, now full and hopeful.

Jishin pulls out his notebook and sits beside her on the gazebo bench.

JISHIN

(reading over the music)

"I don’t know your name / But I

know your loneliness / And maybe

that’s enough / To start a

conversation."

Their words and notes blend perfectly in the afternoon air.

QUIET GIRL

(still playing)

So... what’s your real name? I know

everyone calls you Jishin, but what

do you call yourself?

JISHIN

Jishin. It means “self-confidence”

in Japanese. My grandmother chose

it.

QUIET GIRL

(smiling)

That’s beautiful. I’m... well,

everyone just calls me the quiet

girl. But my name’s actually Aria.

JISHIN

Aria. That's beautiful.

They laugh.

JISHIN (CONT'D)

Aria... I feel like I’ve been

looking for you without knowing

what I was looking for.

40.

ARIA

Maybe we were both looking for

someone who could see us the way we

actually are, instead of the way we

think we’re supposed to be.

JISHIN

You see me?

ARIA

I see a boy who writes poetry

because words are safer than

feelings.

Who sits alone because he’s scared of being alone with people.

Who carries sadness like it’s his favourite jacket.

JISHIN

(amazed)

And you?

ARIA

I see a girl who watches from a far

because the world looks prettier

from a distance. Who writes because

she trusts paper more than people.

Who’s been waiting her whole life

for someone to find her.

JISHIN

Well... I found you.

ARIA

And I let myself be found.

She strums the final chord. It rings out softly.

“EVAPORATED” BY BEN FOLDS FIVE plays.

EXT. CITY STREET – LATE AFTERNOON

Jishin walks home, hands in pockets, face calm. He passes the bus stop and smiles at it now.

A paper airplane glides past. He catches it, grins, tucks it away.

41.

EXT. PARK – GOLDEN HOUR

Aria sits cross-legged on the grass, ukulele beside her, sketching in her diary.

Jishin approaches with two sodas. The camera changes to a distant shot, we zoom in.

ARIA

You stalking me again?

JISHIN

Stalking’s a strong word. Let’s

say… casually orbiting around you.

She squints at him, amused.

ARIA

Uh-huh. And this “orbit” just

happens to include snacks now?

He holds out the soda with mock seriousness.

JISHIN

Hey, this is emotional support

beverage.

She takes it, trying not to smile.

ARIA

So what’s today’s excuse? Research

for a poem? Field study on awkward

reunions?

JISHIN

Nah. Just... testing a theory.

ARIA

Oh yeah? What theory?

JISHIN

That hanging out with you makes the

world suck a little less.

She blinks, caught off guard, then laughs — the kind that breaks tension instead of adds to it.

ARIA

That’s dangerously close to a

compliment, poet boy. You okay?

42.

JISHIN

No promises. Complimenting people

feels like skydiving without a

parachute.

She smirks, picking up her ukulele.

ARIA

Guess I’ll have to be the parachute

then.

JISHIN

Please don’t say that right before

you play something sad again.

She strums a few cheerful chords just to tease him.

ARIA

Relax. Happy songs exist too. You

just have to earn them.

They clink cans and sit back as the music drifts into the sound of Evaporated, blending naturally into the montage.

EXT. PATHWAY – SUNSET

They lean over the railing, watching the view.

ARIA

You ever feel like everyone else is

figuring it out faster?

JISHIN

Every day. It feels like I just

fake confidence sometimes.

She elbows him playfully.

EXT. BRIDGE – NIGHT

Streetlights shimmer on the water.

Jishin folds a paper airplane from a notebook page, tosses it into the breeze.

ARIA

What’d it say?

JISHIN

Something poetic and slightly

cringe.

Perfect.

ARIA

43.

They both laugh quietly.

EXT. EMPTY STREET – NIGHT

They walk side by side under soft streetlights. No big gestures, just a feeling of two kids who finally figured out how to look up.

JISHIN

(softly)

Feels like breathing again.

ARIA

Don’t make it weird, poet boy.

He smiles. She grins back.

The music fades as they disappear down the glowing street. [GOLDEN HOUR LIGHTING, WARM AND HOPEFUL]

A series of beautiful, connected moments:

EXT. SCHOOL ROOFTOP - SUNSET

Jishin and Aria sit together on the rooftop, no longer alone. She writes in her diary while he writes in his notebook. Occasionally they share what they've written and laugh.

EXT. SCHOOL COURTYARD - GOLDEN HOUR

Krithic's van is parked nearby, and all the boys - plus Aria now - are having an impromptu picnic on the grass. Krithic is telling an animated story while everyone listens and laughs.

EXT. PARK - GOLDEN HOUR

Aria plays the ukelele while Jishin sits nearby, both of them creating something new together. The music is no longer melancholic but it's complex, hopeful, alive.

EXT. CITY PARK – DUSK

The park glows with that soft, fading light between day and night.

44.

Jishin, Aria, Tommy, Mike, Krithic, and the rest of the group spread out across the grass laughing, talking, existing.

A small speaker plays Chloe’s nostalgic song.

Tommy chases Mike with the frisbee. Krithic’s filming everyone with his phone. Someone’s lying back in the grass, tracing shapes in the sky.

It feels like the end of something, and the start of something else.

Jishin and Aria sit nearby, watching the others.

JISHIN

You think we’d have found each

other anyway?

ARIA

Yeah. Maybe not the same way, but…

somehow.

JISHIN

You really think that’s how it

works?

ARIA

I think people find each other when

they’re finally ready to be seen.

They sit in silence for a moment, both looking out at their friends, the city lights starting to flicker on behind them.

The camera begins to pull back slowly, rising above the park as the group’s laughter fades into the music.

JISHIN (V.O.)

I used to think being sixteen meant

figuring out who you were supposed

to become. But maybe it’s about

figuring out who you already are

and finding people who like that

person.

The camera continues rising, the figures below growing smaller against the wide, dusky sky.

ARIA (V.O.)

Sometimes the best stories don’t

have endings. They just have... new

beginnings.

45.

The music swells. The park becomes a patch of colour in the fading cityscape as a small, bright moment in the vastness.

FADE TO BLACK.

THE END

FINAL TITLE CARD:

"Threads"

"A film about the invisible connections that bind us together, and the courage it takes to make them visible."

Based on the EPQ question: "To what extent can a non-linear, hyperlink film effectively explore teenage identity, emotion, and existential crisis through mixed cinematic styles?"

FADE OUT.

CREDITS ROLL

About the Competition

The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar is a prestigious platform celebrating diverse voices in literature. It invites participants worldwide to showcase their talents across various categories, including poetry, short stories, essays, and creative writing. The competition aims to foster creativity and inspire writers to push the boundaries of conventional storytelling, encouraging innovative and original expressions of art.

Thank you, Shanthanu Gnanasekar, for sharing "Threads" with us in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. Your script's exploration of teenage identity and emotion through a non-linear narrative is both thought-provoking and captivating. We appreciate your contribution to this year's competition and look forward to seeing more of your creative endeavors in the future.

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