The System - By Payton
- Hashtag Kalakar
- 1 hour ago
- 2 min read
Written By: Payton
Category: Poetry
Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026
In the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026, Payton presents "The System," a compelling poem that delves into the intricate layers of societal expectations and the inherent flaws within our systems. As a participant in the poetry category, Payton skillfully explores themes of education, societal norms, and the struggles of navigating a system not designed for everyone. This work challenges readers to reflect on the pressures and constraints imposed by societal structures.
About the Work
"The System" by Payton is an evocative piece that uses vivid imagery and a candid tone to critique the rigid frameworks that govern our lives. The poem questions societal norms and the unrealistic expectations placed on individuals, especially the youth. Through its reflective and thought-provoking style, Payton encourages readers to consider the disconnect between individual capabilities and societal demands. The work resonates with a sense of urgency and a call for change.
The System
Original Submission by Payton
The system is rigged
“If we judge a fish by its ability to clime a tree
We will never see it succeed.”
The system is rigged
If we expect a bird to fly, first try
It will land on the ground, not on its feet
The system is rigged
The system wasn’t made for children
Who are still learning to navigate this world
The system was made by adults
Who have dressed up, messed up, lead up to this fuck up.
Work life balance means nothing when you’re life is work
“Go outside”
But the grass won’t teach me chemistry
“Eat something”
But my food won’t write my essay
The system is rigged, we where never made to survive.
About the Competition
The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026, hosted by Hashtag Kalakar, is a prestigious platform showcasing diverse literary talents from around the world. This competition celebrates creativity and expression across various categories, including poetry, short stories, and essays. It serves as an opportunity for writers to share their unique voices and perspectives with a global audience, fostering a vibrant community of literary enthusiasts.
Thank you, Payton, for sharing "The System" with us in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. Your poem offers a powerful reflection on societal structures and inspires readers to question and think critically about the world we live in. We appreciate your participation and the thought-provoking insights you've contributed to the competition.
About Hashtag Kalakar
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