Swaying At The Edge
By Sanmitha Sree V
She's right there,
swaying at the edge,
thinking of the leap.
Just a little nudge,
just a step forward
is all she thinks—
jumping off that cliff,
streaming down the walls.
Would she ever feel so
free and unbound?
Oh, they'd call her weak
for even straying to the edge.
How could she even wonder
about falling down?
Yet only a few truly know
The beauty of letting her leap
and go beyond that eyelid.
Only some let a tear slip and cry.
By Sanmitha Sree V

Soo good
The buildup till the end of the poem literally feels like the weight that builds up till the tears come out. Great work!
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