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Excuse Letter - By CADIENTE, Raphael P.

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Written By: CADIENTE, Raphael P.

Category: Excuse Letter

Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

CADIENTE, Raphael P., known for his writing name "Getaway," offers a poignant piece titled "Excuse Letter" in the Creative Writing category of the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. This piece captures the raw emotion and internal struggles of a young mind navigating health and existential musings. Participating from an undisclosed location, Raphael P. Cadiente adds a unique voice to this prestigious international event, which celebrates diverse literary talents and creative expressions from around the world.

About the Work

"Excuse Letter" weaves a vivid tapestry of emotions through its evocative imagery and introspective tone. The piece delves into the narrator's visceral experience and internal conflict, blending elements of surrealism with a touch of vulnerability. The work is marked by its hauntingly beautiful language and the poignant depiction of a young person's confrontation with their own wishes and reality. Raphael P. Cadiente's skillful use of metaphor and symbolism creates a lasting impact, drawing readers into the heart of the narrative journey.

Getaway

Original Submission by CADIENTE, Raphael P.

Excuse Letter

I itch my eyes to wish on the morning stardust.

I scratch like hell, exchanging the chance with the drunken feeling.

The chemistry bereft of sense and comprehension

swells its pursuit for pain like stepping gas on red light.

“But, this is not what I wish for!”, I tell my health, slipping.

The whites turn bloodshot but my fingers still fidget.

Slinking microbes board my sight like refugees on a ship.

Salbabida stays afloat to save them from the ceramic sink.

I don’t want them to make a home out of hurting me.

I upturn the acetone and tilt my head back to catch the drop.

My eyes close and sweet dreams enter like mist.

In the dark, I grip the stethoscope as Percy holds the lightning bolt.

But, I'm not going to school today blindly.

“Bleeding eyes from a wrong wish”, I wrote in the excuse letter.

Tears mark the paper on the Rx symbol.

I write the letter myself because twelve revolutions is enough.

Twelve before the real wish pushes through.

I see in the dark and that’s okay for me, the morbid muse.

A tornado will sweep me up and my excuse letter.

And I will write to God instead of the principal.

that there should be more time for me who has red eyes.

I’m just a sick boy who couldn’t revise.

It's no excuse. please.

About the Competition

The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar is a prestigious event that showcases innovative and original works from talented writers worldwide. It serves as a platform for creative minds to express their unique perspectives and artistic flair through various literary forms. The competition upholds a tradition of excellence, inviting participants to explore themes that resonate on a global scale, fostering a vibrant community of writers and poets.

We extend our heartfelt gratitude to CADIENTE, Raphael P. for sharing "Excuse Letter" with us in this year's Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition. Your contribution enriches the tapestry of voices and stories that define this event. We appreciate your creative spirit and look forward to witnessing your continued journey in the world of literature. Thank you for being a part of this celebration of artistic expression.

About Hashtag Kalakar

Hashtag Kalakar is a creative platform dedicated to providing artists, writers, singers and other creative talents with opportunities to showcase their work and reach wider audiences through competitions, features and creative initiatives.

 
 
 

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