E c h o e s - By Ilaria Kaharudin
Written By: Ilaria Kaharudin
Category: Poetry
Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026
Ilaria Kaharudin, writing under the name E c h o e s, presents a captivating piece titled "E c h o e s" as part of the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. This compelling work is a testament to Kaharudin's mastery in weaving intricate imagery and exploring profound themes. With each line, the reader is drawn into a world where echoes of the past reverberate through the present, inviting an introspective journey into the nature of identity and transformation.
About the Work
"E c h o e s" delves into the haunting realms of darkness and transformation, blending mythical motifs with vivid, dream-like imagery. The poem's atmospheric tone is underscored by its exploration of existential themes, inviting readers to ponder the boundaries between life and the ethereal. Kaharudin's use of rich, evocative language crafts a narrative that is both unsettling and mesmerizing, urging one to listen closely to the echoes of the night and the whispers of hidden fears.
E c h o e s
Original Submission by Ilaria Kaharudin
E c h o e s
Beware
“The universal belief is,
that a person sucked by a vampyre becomes a vampyre himself,
and sucks in his turn.”
* (Polidori, footnote)
“Listen––
can you hear her cries?”
e c h o e c h o
throughout the lullaby of the night.
we lay bundled in concrete walls of silence,
rolled in rough cotton sheets
our human forms caught
in the suspended circumference
of reality.
warm hands––
stroking fingers
speak
in the resounding hollow darkness,
a hereditary warning:
“do not venture into the night”
for at the base of the hill she resides,
fused with the crooked boughs
of the frangipani tree
I giggle in disbelief,
turning in my feathered grave,
I peer through the glass of my tomb,
twisted branches
flecked with skeletal petals
scraping.
Bewitched
“At midnight drain the stream of life;”
* (Byron, 762)
That night––I dream
of death
and his pale maiden,
clad in bone-white skin
that devours the soul
of the complete moon,
purnama
she floats upon
the saccharine scent of dreams,
in plumes of tuberose
and ushered wishes,
ivory blossoms that sing
to the celestial pearl
and wither under the sun.
the maiden hangs
in speckled moonlight,
under a starless canopy,
dipped in fragments of fallen moons,
she exhales
in erroneous ethereality.
whorls of inky tresses spilling over
gossamer robes,
her sensual silhouette shrouded.
unease claws
through me
––pinching,
carving crescent moons into my
corpse.
her eyes flash––studded rubies
in hollow bone,
orbs of fire
shattering the obsidian slate.
blood.
the need for it palpitates in her pupils,
I am lost in vermillion irises.
Bitten
"Sucks from my veins the streaming life,
And drains the fountain of my heart!
* (Stagg, 73-74)
a malevolent grin cuts
across her serene smile
as she contorts,
red filaments. masticated tendons.
eddied,
sallow skin slides
against my own.
serrated talons
caress
the delicate arch
of my throat
her ebony hair
enshrouds me
in the opalescent veil
of cloistering darkness.
paralysis.
her tongue crests the column
of my vitality,
fangs piercing
rivers
as she channels
streams of my ardent blood
through her spectral form.
nothingness
pervades me.
Bound
“Thy victims ere they yet expire
Shall know the demon for their sire,
As cursing thee, thou cursing them,
Thy flowers are withered on the stem”
* (Byron, 765-768)
I awake––
on a bed of nails,
tiny lacerations
puncturing my flesh
spilling
dr ip
ip
ipp
ing.
my throat has been stuffed
with mockeries of the moon,
glass pearls that orbit
the aperture of my speech,
marbles.
maybe I have lost them?
they blot out my trachea
as I strain
for desperate breath,
heaving––
I cannot
cry
nor open my mouth
to scream.
I am blanketed in carved silence
and the silk spilling of my own blood
coagulating
on iron needles
mati di-timpa tanah tambah!
there is dirt
in my sockets
soil packed,
into the hollow curvatures of my eyes
covering the casings of my cataracts,
stained clay.
I see the world
in slashes
of carmine.
my blood has seeped
into reality.
I am overcome by it.
I respire,
through the flayed skin of trees
and rinds of roots,
I am trapped
in the cloying scent
that reverberates of dreams.
daun lalang gulong-gulong
the leaves of weeds are rolling
carvings of wood encircle
my tongue,
I pilfer a futile breath,
the timber shavings
pricking the delicate cavern of my lungs.
my organs deliquesce––
congealing
like chilled vulcanite,
rubber weights
trapped
in my fleshy encasement.
I breathe in bark
and sticky sap,
caught within the whispers
of the trees,
the lilting tinkle
of frozen flowers
clinking
in the midnight silence.
I exist––
beyond the borders
of corporeal mortality,
bound by a vengeance
that is not my own,
slave to the relentless
carnal desire
of retribution.
I know nothing,
but this consuming craving
drowning every sense––
a guttural yearning
that cleaves
through the pillars of my ribs.
kan pelemang hati Jin Pontianak.
Buried
“And from my veins life's juices drain;”
* (Stagg, 82)
My semangat
is bleeding.
vermillion wine
staining my insides,
trickling. sloshing.
my mind swallows
percolations,
echoes of a past,
of life––of humanity
fragments,
earth. lips. cotton petals.
a memory––
mutilated by the sickle of time
presses incessantly
between my cranium,
it ruptures bone,
shredding the webbed veil
that tarnishes the slits of my sight.
a voice
dis…..torted
e c h o e s
“hear her cries”
“listen?”
before…
no.
panic howls
“can you”
Listen.
Listen.
Drip.
Drip.
fingers groping my brain
frigid palms
Drip.
blood vomits
from the perforation
at the back of my
skull.
metal
rupturing
elforyn bone.
shearing glossed locks
Drip.
“venture into
the night”
Drip.
Drip.
“Do”
“Not––”
“Listen.”
to her cries
About the Competition
The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026, hosted by Hashtag Kalakar, is a celebrated platform for writers and poets around the world to showcase their creative talents. The competition encourages participants to push the boundaries of literary expression, inviting submissions that reflect diverse perspectives and innovative storytelling. This prestigious event continues to be a beacon for emerging voices in the literary arts.
Thank you, Ilaria Kaharudin, for sharing "E c h o e s" with the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. Your poem offers a profound exploration of themes that resonate with vivid imagery and emotional depth. We look forward to seeing more of your creative endeavors and the unique perspectives you bring to the world of poetry.
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