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You Make Me Feel Alive

By Madelynn Ramm


When creative writing becomes restricted writing. 

You remind me to break free. 

You inspire my creative flow, allowing myself to unleash a surge of words. 

Previously unable to express. 


It seems with your appearance in my life, 

I find my artistic nature seeks to write.

To paint my feelings.

Traversing the canvas and symbolise my truest desire.

For your undivided attention. 

I wish to hold you, 

Claim you,

Stand beside you. 

Talk freely and easily. 

Forging the deepest bond two humans could create.

Where trust and love embrace themselves. 

Intertwining, and creating the silhouette of a duo in love.


For the idea of you flowers the garden in my mind. 

Spurring fantasy to consume my thoughts. 

Where I will finally breathe the same air as yours, 

As our lips dance between sweet kisses and smiles of bliss. 

You make me feel alive.


By Madelynn Ramm


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Mita Geb
Mita Geb
4 days ago
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

To be that muse in someone’s life🥹

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notizzyhall
7 days ago
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

this is a fabulous piece of poetry. flows well and has great imagery

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