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Where heaven and hell share a Breath - By P Sahasra Samhitha

Written By: P Sahasra Samhitha

Category: contrapuntal poem

Competition: Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

In the intriguing poem "Where heaven and hell share a Breath," P Sahasra Samhitha presents an evocative exploration of duality through the unique format of a contrapuntal poem. Part of the Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026, this work invites readers to reflect on the coexistence of contrasting emotions and experiences, illustrating the complexity of life. The poem intricately weaves themes of heaven and hell, capturing the essence of human existence in its rawest form.

About the Work

This poem masterfully employs the contrapuntal style to juxtapose themes of heaven and hell. The left side of the poem delves into isolation and suffering, while the right side radiates hope and warmth. When read horizontally, it encapsulates the full spectrum of life-raw and real, illustrating how grief and hope often coexist. The piece is rich with vivid imagery, creating a profound emotional experience for the reader.

Where heaven and hell share a Breath

Original Submission by P Sahasra Samhitha

Where heaven and hell share a Breath

Where heaven and hell share a Breath

The fierce fire rages whilst soft light gathers

And smoke chokes the air inside quiet waters

Walls close in like fists doors open wide and free

And no one hears my cries and calls out my name gently

Every step feels wrong every path feels right

Every word a sting every word takes flight

I count my mistakes I count my blessings

Lie stones inside my chest like birds on morning wings

No peace for weary mind and peace I always find

Yet in this burning place yet in this shining place

I still search for grace I make space for grace

Not all dark, not all light Not all dark, not all light

But something in between but everything in between

This is where I stand this is where I stand

Neither lost nor saved both broken and believed

Just life, raw and real just life, held and healed

Doing what I feel giving what I feel.

Explanation:

Left Side Only (Hell / Suffering): Focuses entirely on isolation, loss, decay, and the coldest moments of human existence.

Right Side Only (Heaven / Bliss): Focuses purely on hope, warmth, rebirth, and comfort.

Read Horizontally Together (Life): It sounds exactly like the human experience. It shows that life is not just good or just bad. We often experience grief and hope, or loss and love, at the exact same time.

About the Competition

The Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar is a prestigious event celebrating diverse voices in literature. It invites poets and writers to share their unique perspectives and creative expressions. Participants from around the world contribute their works, enriching the literary landscape with fresh, innovative ideas and narratives.

We extend our gratitude to P Sahasra Samhitha for sharing "Where heaven and hell share a Breath" with us in the Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. This poignant poem offers a compelling reflection on the human condition, reminding us of the intricate dance between joy and sorrow in life.

About Hashtag Kalakar

Hashtag Kalakar is a creative platform dedicated to providing artists, writers, singers and other creative talents with opportunities to showcase their work and reach wider audiences through competitions, features and creative initiatives.

 
 
 

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