The Woes of The Unseen
- hashtagkalakar
- Jan 6
- 1 min read
Updated: Jan 17
By Ephrem Benny
An unquenchable thirst for wantedness,
An insatiable hunger for love,
So obscure, I'm unseen, I mused;
Like a ghost, unnoticed, as unseen as smoke in the air.
Rapports, fleeting, never static,
As I, my presence, found or not,
Barely ever makes any distinction.
Like Zephyr's soft caress to some,
Like a belligerent wind to others,
But no matter, neither finds me worthy of care.
Inexplicable emotions, running rampant,
Unanswered questions, ever so despondent,
Is it too much, this seeking for love?
An unfamiliar ache,
A feeling long forgotten,
A hopeful wish, one to be wrapped by it,
Like a blanket, soft and enfolding, that billows me,
Waiting in patience, for fate to grant me peace.
By Ephrem Benny
Teen age thoughts narrated beautifully.
Expression of emotion is so loud... Well attriculated
Scattered reflections planted in teenage angst. Nice try!
Excellent!!!
Narrative of every man's basic longings and the agony of being unseen. The poem depicts the emotional ' have not ' very well and reminds of the emptiness of the unreckoned of all times. Well written. Congratulations to the poet !