The Ocean
- Hashtag Kalakar
- Nov 30, 2025
- 1 min read
By Sabareesh. N
Slip, I fell into
The mighty deep ocean
Of sad cries.
I was tied with a massive ball
Of dark and despair,
Like food going down caves of sharp stones.
I sank down and down
To the bottom of the blue,
Followed by electric eels
With electric touches of failure.
I saw the sky of joy
For a little help,
Then a hand of kindness
Covered me with petals of care,
Took me up and up,
A hurdle in the way,
The massive ball.
But the hand was backed
By sharp scissors
Of advice from the wise.
I came out of the tear,
The hand taught me
To accept faith,
Light your dark life
With flames of friendship,
Sparks of motherhood.
Then the tear dried.
For myself, I lied
To wait for the future
Of glory, and the way you lead to the light.
By Sabareesh. N

Very nice poem
This poem beautifully describes a journey from sadness to hope using strong ocean imagery. The emotions feel deep and real, and the idea of kindness, advice, friendship, and motherhood helping the speaker rise is very touching. The transformation from darkness to light gives the poem a powerful and hopeful message. A meaningful and expressive piece—well done!
Nice👌
Nice work! ❤
Love it ❤️💯