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The Hibiscus Meditations - By Jayaram G K Menon

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Written By: Jayaram G K Menon

Category: Poetry

Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

Participating in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026, Jayaram G K Menon, under the pen name JayMen, brings forth "The Hibiscus Meditations." This captivating poetry piece explores the profound connection between the natural world and human contemplation. Through vivid imagery and reflective prose, Jayaram invites readers into a realm where the beauty of a hibiscus plant becomes a source of inspiration and introspection. This work stands as a testament to the power of observation and meditation, drawing parallels between the cycles of nature and the intricacies of human thought.

About the Work

"The Hibiscus Meditations" weaves an intricate tapestry of themes such as growth, transformation, and the symbiotic relationship between nature and introspection. Jayaram G K Menon's poetic style is both contemplative and vivid, capturing the essence of a morning ritual that unfolds in the presence of a hibiscus plant. The poem's tone is serene yet profound, encouraging readers to pause and reflect on the unnoticed details of life. Through this work, the hibiscus transforms into a symbol of meditation, prompting a deeper understanding of life's cyclical nature.

The Hibiscus Meditations

Original Submission by Jayaram G K Menon

THE HIBISCUS MEDITATIONS

by JayMen

The hibiscus in my garden

The sight of the hibiscus plant in the morning as I sip my Bru starts my day the best way

The plant that shutdown for the night starts the day shift and will work till the sun goes down

The factory hums as the assembly lines convey air and water and sunlight to whisk up E

In the magic form of ATP expelling the O but keeping the C.

This plant prompts my meditation naturally once I discern its outline

Trying to ravel knotty thoughts and threading the seemly ones

Most are left to hang loose and wait for another reverie

As the poem gets sewn in stitches until in time there’s not one on.

The sipping rations the daydreaming to about half an hour

The ritual is hoary, but surprises are a feature

As birds and insects do make cameos and offer me

New threads for me to change tack as well as nip and tuck.

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“Said greeting twice in Italy!”

“Excuse me! Not quite!”

Eloi and Morlock

I see my hibiscus tree everyday but never its roots

They toil out of sight and rightly so, being rather soiled.

An underground machine that bores the earth over time

For unique minerals and plain water to run the plant.

The plant feels like a hybrid of two dissimilar species.

Roots are energetic Morlocks striving in permanent night

Branches, leaves and flowers are airy Eloi steeped in light.

Not engaging in tug-of-war, only push-pull interdependence.

My thoughts and ideas and their occasional expressions

Do grow into Eloi when the chemistry works out right

But only if toil, roil and moil are applied as foils

Searching like the roots and aiming for a vein

I could be trapped under and never come into bloom

With no rare fruit or flower in my palm and frisson so warm

Both roots and bare branches gripped by the long winter night

Never emerging and ventilating in the auroral light.

My meditation is the union of Eloi and Morlock

The attainment of repose after furious shovelling

Meeting Loki or Olmec one time, then Locke or Milo the next time

The hibiscus is intermediary and intercessor.

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Bird of Thoth of Biblical land, head to tail, the other way!

Kaizen of Chores

Being alive entails routine preoccupation with daily chores

And weekly episodes, monthly specials and annual house-shaking

Not to feel overwhelmed with stuff that crawls and creeps up on you

It is best to set aside some time to spruce up your turf.

Take the must-have mop and duster, broom and brush

Each to be wielded by unified hand, mind and eye

They aid you in getting to know every inch of your patch.

Never take for granted the cozy surroundings you occupy.

With wash, dry and iron as well with patch, polish and sew

There is a reminder to grasp and caress the very fabric of you

Prisoners every day long to start their drill to keep boredom at bay

Their chores set the tempo in the rut of their day

Take a break from your house-arrest and step outside your door

To be greeted by Mr. Mower and Mrs. Shears, the rake and the hoe

Longing to cut trim, dig and prune lest the dreaded rust set in

They offer their services free of charge save for a good sweat.

What should be discovered in these pieces of work

That is only possible when they are done with relish

Is the appreciation of their in-built disposition

To affirm the ordinary and the necessary, regularly.

What your mind is noticing when dwelling on these errands

Is the kaizen of doing them right by doing them often

The plant can shed leaves care-free and guilt-free

The gardener must pick up the pieces and the debris.

Upkeep requires an organic kind of chore-ography

Like the kind apparent on a hibiscus branch

Where the leaves alternate along its length

In sequenced steps to ensure the red flourish at the end.

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Heard of hikers acquiring Astilbe, ignoring the odds, backing the rest!

Green blind spot

Almost every leaf on my hibiscus plant is a healthy green to my eye

I’m over the moon with that but being a chloro-phile I had expected them to be black.

Why not feast on all the colours of the sunlight so the plant gets a sugar high

Do leaves have a blind spot or a tin ear in their sweet tooth that explains the slack?

That plants themselves polish off the red and blue meats but not the greens-

Could be used as an excuse by kids when their parents insist on the same.

“Finish your greens!”, “They’re good for you”, “Broccoli, spinach and beans”

The words ring true - but the cooking must be flavourful - not bland and lame!

Leaves are organic antennae soaking up the Sun’s full-spectrum broadcast,

The young Earth’s genius invention to decode and implement the Message of the Stars-

“Tune in, Turn on, Store up” - the foundation of a food chain so vast

That the Planet terra-formed itself, first of the Sun’s Children to do so - not Mars!

There is an eon-tested theme in my hibiscus plant’s genes - arcane and wise

“Greeny energy need not be swallowed whole - send to others - it’s not a loss!”

The colour embedded in the white light is distilled and sent to my eyes

Teasing and tasking me to do my tiny part in getting the “feast on me” message across!

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US work visa associated with topless sporting event?

Yellow fever

Like houses along a lane the leaves have their own addresses

So that utilities laid out along channels from the stem

Can be billed accurately and identified and reached

Should a 999 alert be vital to send.

Now and then you can see a house stick out unlike the others

Something is going on but how and why are the questions

Has it been singled out – by whom and for what

When did it happen and where exactly did it start?

The leaf is yellow, there’s not a trace of green

Something has changed and the house proclaims it

All the bills have been paid but the utilities do not fully flow

Is destiny the cause and is there a solve?

Is it merely random just due to chance

Has it been cursed and is it deserved

Is it because it wanted green light and so gave up yellow

Is it by a choice that the leaf made?

Only a few leaves turn coat and the rest are unaffected

Like hair on the body turning from black to white

The blood flow is there but something is lacking

The pigment reflects the zero intake of light

Has an alien probe compromised the channels

And the alarm raised so that nutrients are diverted

Keep this leaf isolated and in quarantine

Lest the parasites freeload and set up shop.

It could also be that the leaf has become an old folks’ home

Just waiting as the mood takes a turn

The leaf’s prism seems to have deviated somewhat

It’s in a prisn now, penalised and marking time.

But the leaves that turn yellow are so few

And I cannot discern any obvious pattern

As to what makes those ones prey

While other remain so healthy and hale.

If you say that all such leaves can be examined

By microscope for specks, scabs and crimps

To prove that the cause is from outside

Then I’ll wait for nano-robots to do the work.

Where the seasons are four, all leaves change

Their green to reds, browns and yellows

But here in the tropics, they know that the sun

Will always come back and not leave them waiting.

The mystery of yellowing is not quite done

Consensus is that they are on life support and must go

The science is settled – I don’t think so-

Nothing ever has been solved fully in the world.

I would like to offer another take on yellow fever

I think the leaf doesn’t want to work the shift anymore

It wants to try something else away from the daily grind

Like going out on a limb and becoming an outlier.

It’s the same with white hairs on the body

Some choose to not be bots anymore

Not all black hair has that choice readily available

It’s just that only a comparative few have.

The plant and the body can afford a level of nonconformity

Some cells have a get out of jail card

The plant and the body allow experimentation

In times of relative abundance and safety.

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He possessively clutched biscuit, then discarded it

Borderland

The flowers blaze in the sun

They pull in the little flyers

The offer stands only for a few days

Better give it while you can.

Then it’s time to fade away and drop off

Unlike the yellow who can still hang around

The red must vacate the premises

Soon as the goodies run out.

Where exactly do they go

Neither the stem nor the roots know

They speak of somewhere in-between

Not open air or dark earth.

Is there such a place which is neither earth nor air

A borderland between the two realms

Air stocked with gases and packets of light

Earth with its mineral water.

What could the borderland be

Where do flowers depart for

Do they disappear forever

Or do their essences transform?

Stems do have some memories of their emergence into the air

Cast out of the earth and choking in the gases and the light

The shock of arrival onto foreign soil and adapting to its laws

Which they do with a flick of a switch to turn on and tune in.

In that early emergence would they not have had a glimpse

Of the borderland between the realms of earth and air

Where green grass spreads in all directions

Then forgotten as the stem is forced upward.

Could that not be the fabled borderland

The heaven of the fallen flowers

Where the invisible ones unravel them

And the essences are dispensed accordingly.

I see this borderland which the hibiscus might not

It is good to touch it and let it grow under your feet

Return to the grassroots for every endeavour

And in the end put yourself out to pasture.

The crux of the flower that reaches the borderland

Is recycled and recobbled and sent out as useful elements

That are lego-lised into new entities

That might not be flowers at all.

Is this the plant’s obligation to pay tribute

To allow the realms to amplify experience

Within the mandate of their creations

Setting in motion the C and N cycles.

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1. 53 83 16 29 16 ?

Elementary, my dear…!

ROOT and STEM

Set stock by family heritage

Oppose axis and pull the plug

Hail Ram and come home

Let Sarsaparilla flow!

Develop foundation and embed beam

Fasten spring to anchor shaft

Shoot and cheer on, restrain the radical

Arise and applaud, tuber and trunk!

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Fix Irish clubs without taking sides

With stigma and style

Let me tell you of the birds and the bees

Once they got hooked on our sweeties

We found a new way to multiply

That was never there before the Permian.

But of the first flowers we have a dim memory

Male and female parts we had ‘em both

But not like what we have now

Which are ovules and carpels.

Our numbers grew to attract little flyers

We would succour and they would suck

Their bodies rubbing stamen and pistil,

Petals and anthers with stigma and style!

Many trees kept the old ways and avoided flowery pose

Stuck their seeds into fruits marketed as free lunch

Those who survived stomachs and intestinal tracts

Got to be dumped far and wide on the ground.

Our way was a gamble with no fruit, only flower

From the purely practical and austere

We became exhibitionistic and flashier

Attracting clientele who became regulars.

The little flyers brought pollen not quite the same

The flowers that blossomed were different looking

Even their leaves and stems and roots welcomed the change

Mutt-ation produces high breeds now and then.

I’m just a garden variety plant

My gardener is quite enamoured with my kind

His kind has cultivars who are mutters

They seek to produce versions of the perfect rose.

In some distant future when there are very few gardeners

We will be taken care of by nanny-bots

There will be almost no need for little flyers

To carry love notes as matchmakers.

I like my gardener who understands me

His gaze is neutral and not easily swayed

He treats me as a fountainhead

I am the active prism of his meditations.

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Who in BRICS scrubs evenly?

About the Competition

The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026, hosted by Hashtag Kalakar, is a celebration of literary creativity from around the world. This prestigious platform provides writers and poets an opportunity to share their voices and be part of a global conversation through the written word. With a focus on nurturing talent and fostering creative expression, the competition attracts a diverse range of styles and themes, showcasing the richness of contemporary writing.

We extend our heartfelt gratitude to Jayaram G K Menon for sharing "The Hibiscus Meditations" with us in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. This piece offers a unique perspective on the interplay between nature and mindfulness. We look forward to seeing more of Jayaram's insightful work in the future and thank him for his contribution to the world of poetry.

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