The Cry of Agony - By Thobani Mtshali

Written By: Thobani Mtshali

Category: Poetry

Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

Thobani Mtshali presents "The Cry of Agony," a compelling piece of poetry, in the esteemed Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. This evocative work draws inspiration from RuNett Nia Ebo's poem "LORD WHY DID YOU MAKE ME BLACK," delving into themes of identity and creation. Through a profound dialogue, Mtshali's poem explores the complexities of being, inviting readers to reflect on the inherent strength and beauty within. Join us in celebrating the artistry and emotional depth of this remarkable entry in the poetry category.

About the Work

"The Cry of Agony" by Thobani Mtshali is a poignant exploration of identity and self-reflection. The poem is imbued with a somber yet empowering tone, as it navigates the struggles and triumphs associated with racial identity. Rich in imagery, Mtshali's words paint a vivid picture of resilience and inner strength, emphasizing the profound purpose and beauty of one's existence. The piece resonates with a universal message of empowerment and acceptance, encouraging readers to find pride and hope within themselves.

The Cry of Agony

Original Submission by Thobani Mtshali

The Cry of Agony by Thobani Mtshali

NOTE: Inspired by a poem LORD WHY DID YOU MAKE ME BLACK by RuNett Nia Ebo.

A Black Child is sitting on a dusty stool.

So dusty he's coughing.

He's coughing.

Tears are dropping.

GOD WHY DID YOU MAKE ME BLACK?

Those are his words.

LORD WHY DID YOU MAKE ME SO BLACK,

For black is the color of badness.

Black is the color of misfortunes.

The sign of death and injury?

The colour of clouds that represent bad weather.

However.

Black is the colour of sunset.

LORD... WHY DID YOU MAKE ME BLACK!!?

Why Did You Make Me Black,

And never gave me a chance to choose.

An opportunity to decide.

Why DID YOU MAKE ME SO BLACK but never,

Stored in my heart reasons.

No explanations nor elucidations,

Or least, elaborations.

WHY!? While you say I'm your creation.!?

Then He The LORD answered.

His voice echoing through the place.

His words so strong.

His answer so unquestionable.

WHY DID I MAKE YOU BLACK!!?

Child. Get up from that chair!

Crush your fears!

Wipe your tears!

And listen to hear!

My child.

I made you black not because,

You represent badness.

Not because you're a way of darkness,

A passage of misfortune.

But... I made you black.

For Black means strong.

For Black Is the sign of minerals & minerals have wealth.

My child, I made you black for black means power.

I made you black for you're in my image.

I made you black for through space your complexion is not affected. Through matter your skin color is not affected.

Through time your flash is not affected.

I made you black not because you represent hate,

But because you hide love.

Love from within.

For you withhold peace.

Peace that's invisible.

I made you black for your issues not to be transparent.

I made you black for in it no-one knows what happens inside.

For only you knows your hardship and the sufferings of your emotions. I made you black not full of hate, but for you to be bold,

And even run to the valleys naked, but because you match with nature... no predator will hunt you.

My child, I made you black for a PURPOSE.

Nevertheless did I mistaken you.

I made you black for black represent hope,

For after every darkness there's always light.

I made you black

For you're a sighn of dirt,

The same dirt that is the proof of hardwork.

The same black that the Jaguar is.

So I did not only made you black,

Though I made you in my image.

As my reflection.

LORD I THANK YOU FOR MAKING ME BLACK.

About the Competition

The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 hosted by Hashtag Kalakar celebrates the power of language and storytelling from voices around the world. This prestigious event honors creativity and emotional expression, offering a platform for poets and writers to share their unique perspectives. Participants explore diverse themes, crafting works that inspire and challenge audiences. The competition continues to be a beacon for emerging talents, fostering a vibrant community of literary enthusiasts and creators.

We extend our heartfelt gratitude to Thobani Mtshali for sharing "The Cry of Agony" with us in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. Your poignant exploration of identity and resilience has touched many, offering profound insights into the strength and beauty of being. Thank you for contributing your voice to this celebration of creativity and expression.

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