Tangled Up - By Barza Bathool

Written By: Barza Bathool

Category: poetry

Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

Barza Bathool's poem "Tangled Up" is a heartfelt entry in the poetry category of the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. This evocative piece explores themes of love, longing, and the complex emotions surrounding relationships. Bathool's work captures the beauty of silence and the pain of loneliness, offering readers a glimpse into the tender yet tumultuous feelings that accompany unrequited love.

About the Work

"Tangled Up" by Barza Bathool weaves a narrative of emotional complexity, using vivid imagery to convey the speaker's inner turmoil. The poem juxtaposes the serenity of silence with the violence of unfulfilled affection, creating a poignant contrast. Bathool's use of celestial imagery highlights the imbalance in relationships, portraying a dynamic of giving and receiving love that is both touching and tragic.

Tangled Up

Original Submission by Barza Bathool

Tangled up

The beauty of silence,

Still I prefer violence

The pain of loneliness,

Best known by me

The moment I saw you,

My eyes were on you

All these thoughts stu>ed up,

It feels like I’ve been cu>ed up

Do you just act with me nice

Cause I only see her in your eyes

Like the sun showers its light on the moon I shower my love on you

Like the moon showers its light on the earth, You shower your love on her

In the end its always “her and you”,

Never “me and you”

Theres still a ray of hope inside me

A little voice consoling me

Do I still stand a chance to be with you? In another life, it will be real with you

About the Competition

The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar celebrates diverse voices in the literary arts. This esteemed competition invites participants worldwide to share their creative expressions, offering a platform for poets and writers to showcase their talent and passion for storytelling.

Thank you, Barza Bathool, for sharing "Tangled Up" with us in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. Your poem offers a moving exploration of love and longing, resonating with those who have experienced similar emotional journeys. We appreciate your contribution and look forward to seeing more of your evocative poetry in the future.

About Hashtag Kalakar

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