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Take Me Into the Garden - By Jack Jordan

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Written By: Jack Jordan

Category: Poetry

Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

Jack Jordan's poem "Take Me Into the Garden" is a featured submission in the Poetry category of the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. This evocative piece invites readers into a deeply personal journey of longing and introspection. As part of the esteemed competition hosted by Hashtag Kalakar, the poem explores themes of healing and realization with a delicate touch. Jordan's work, through its thoughtful and emotive language, offers a reflective glimpse into the human experience, leaving a lasting impression on its audience.

About the Work

"Take Me Into the Garden" by Jack Jordan beautifully captures the essence of longing for life and renewal. The poem’s tone shifts from hope to a striking realization, creating an emotional tapestry that resonates with readers. Through vivid imagery of a garden and the warmth of the morning sun, Jordan's work invokes a sense of peace and introspection. The poem's narrative unfolds with a gentle rhythm, ultimately confronting the poignant theme of life and its fragile nature.

Take me into the garden

Original Submission by Jack Jordan

TAKE ME INTO THE GARDEN

Take me out into the garden

Where I can see the flowers.

How long have I been in bed,

How many painful hours?

But I am feeling better

The fever has left my brow.

The morning seems much brighter,

I think I’ll get up now.

I long to feel the warmth

Of the early morning sun

To feel my strength returning

To stand and walk and run.

Why are the faces around me

Tearful, sad and drawn?

Can’t they see I’m better

In the light of early dawn?

They do not hear me speaking

The doctor shakes his head.

Oh God, I’m feeling better

Surely I’m not …….dead?

About the Competition

The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026, hosted by Hashtag Kalakar, celebrates the diverse voices of writers worldwide. This prestigious event provides a platform for poets and authors to share their unique perspectives and stories. Participants from various backgrounds submit their works, contributing to a vibrant tapestry of global creative expression. The competition is renowned for its inclusivity and dedication to fostering a community of literary talents.

We extend our heartfelt thanks to Jack Jordan for sharing "Take Me Into the Garden" with us. Your participation in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 enriches the literary landscape. We appreciate your contribution and the depth of emotion conveyed in your work. Thank you for being a part of this creative journey.

About Hashtag Kalakar

Hashtag Kalakar is a creative platform dedicated to providing artists, writers, singers and other creative talents with opportunities to showcase their work and reach wider audiences through competitions, features and creative initiatives.

 
 
 

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