Strings Of Heart - Tunes Of Love
- Hashtag Kalakar
- Nov 26
- 1 min read
By Ajjarapu Neeharika
When my thoughts were haphazard,
Running at a million miles per hour,
Chaos was reigning over my consciousness.
Like a Zephyr, you came near.
Eyes made voiceless promises.
A seal was impressed by verges.
Time had lost its importance.
Space had condensed in accordance.
Breaths of warmth arose to zenith.
Hearths of zestful hugs rose to the summit.
Bits of memories in bites
Bore through my soul,
Painted my heart in fiery reds
and all my miseries burned in shreds!
Free from shackles
My heart dances
Tied in knots
Our bond deepens!
By Ajjarapu Neeharika
Wonderful work, the complex emotions were well expressed. Good!
Amazing, love is celebrated in this poem! The joyous feelings of love were written so beautifully! Heartfelt.
Wow! I liked the use of red colour as “fiery reds”. The tone of the poem is really passionate and spoke of love in a celebratory way. Keeping love above the time, space and literally everything is adorable. Good work, keep it up!❤️
Deeply explored the feelings of true love,the importance of a true bond in life that gives support in vivid ways.
The poem conveyed the feelings of young love so beautifully but in a very refined manner. Formal and endearing.