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Shrine of Greed

By Elyssa Mitts


I watched you worship your god

I listened to you chant your prayer

I smelled the blood that you offered

I tasted the flesh that you cut

I felt the love that you wanted


You are an intriguing one indeed

You wished for lovely things

Different from those who surround you

You understand what lays deep in your heart

Continue to crave for your wants


These people are tainted by society’s words

Asking for money or power or control

Offering up souls or bodies or favors

Yet the bodies of others and not themselves

They don’t truly understand greed


Sin creeps into even the brightest of places

But people assume it lurks only in shadows

So they ask the shadows to spread

Not knowing that sin is standing beside them

These people don’t get wishes coming true


You asked the sin standing right next to you

Yearning heartlessly for more lovely things

Because you believed sin to be your friend

You will be granted lovely things

Just as you have been granted before

Because you sacrificed your blood and flesh

But were careful to keep your soul and favors

You will get what you crave and desire

But you will come back once more

Because you only get little and never enough


You will continue to crave and desire

You will continue to want lovely things

You will continue to get lovely things

But you will never get a lovely life

Because you befriended sin


But I bid you to return

Your company is pleasant

Your blood and flesh are delicious

So visit me again dear human

At my shrine that revels in your greed


By Elyssa Mitts


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Kayla Senalle
Kayla Senalle
5 days ago
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As a Catholic, this poem really opened my eyes to how people, and even myself, tend to choose our "sin" and other worldly pleasures/vices in order to make ourselves feel good in the moment. However, it is only by chasing God's love and turning away from our sin and the desires of the flesh that we can overcome this feeling of needing/wanting more and more. This poem is written phenomenal, and by far my favorite that I have read on this website. Keep up the stupendous work!

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Rebecca Lewis
Rebecca Lewis
6 days ago
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

All of your poems are amazing and the titles are just so good too!! You're a rockstar!

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The poem use of religious diction and how you personify greed shows just how blind people are to their sins because they see it as this gracious huge thing rather than the everyday temptation

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Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

A very well done poem. Its exploration of how self-destructive greed is really captivated my attention.

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Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Interesting poem. I feel like it’s expressing the idea of having to keep your true self locked away because society won’t accept the true you. Now I’m wondering if the reflection is the true you or not.


Guess you could say you’re talking to the man in the mirror.

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