Ocean Floor's Flame
- Hashtag Kalakar
- Aug 9, 2025
- 1 min read
By A.J.R. Mennon
Drowning
At the bottom of my ocean, I looked about but couldn’t see
Found neither Heart nor Mind to salvage me.
At the bottom of my ocean, I dared to look within:
Found sunken in my deepest darkness…a flame burning
Drawn by whose light I chose to close in
For all contradictions to burn— I saw serenity in striving
Though still mired in misfortune
Without seeing the surface
I chose to Arise, yet again.
I swam upward, clawing;
Renewed
Through and through.
By A.J.R. Mennon

Absolutely BEAUTIFUL <3 <3
A powerful endeavour to ascend from the pressured depths into light. I picture a lone figure, small in the vast waters that surround them but using every effort to struggle towards the surface. Out of air but not out of hope. Gorgeous writing.
Nice poem!:)
Inspiring and motivational.
Wonderful Lines.