I Will Take/You Took - By Boitumelo (Tumi) Mogari

Written By: Boitumelo (Tumi) Mogari

Category: Hyrbid Genre Short Story - Crisis of the I

Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

Boitumelo (Tumi) Mogari presents a captivating piece titled "I Will Take/You Took," seamlessly blending genres to explore profound themes in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. This hybrid genre short story delves into the complex dynamics of identity and possession, reflecting a poignant crisis of the self. Mogari's work stands as a testament to the enduring art of storytelling, skillfully weaving a narrative that invites readers into a world of introspection and emotional depth.

About the Work

"I Will Take/You Took" by Tumi Mogari intricately explores the nuances of identity through vivid imagery and a haunting narrative. The story delves into the consuming nature of relationships, where taking and giving become a visceral exchange. Mogari's narrative style is evocative, employing stark imagery to highlight the physical and emotional toll of such exchanges. The mood is contemplative and raw, leaving readers to ponder the delicate balance of dependence and autonomy within personal connections.

I Will Take/You Took

Original Submission by Boitumelo (Tumi) Mogari

“I will take/You took”

by Tumi Mogari

I got so used to you taking that I didn’t notice when what you took became parts of me. Fistfuls of fat I didn’t think I would miss and

entire clumps of hair,

you ripped away –

you would not be satisfied until all of me

was inside of you.

You were not gentle, I did not expect this of you

- perhaps if you were,

I would have been more surprised and taken notice sooner.

I wonder how you would write this… the way I began to consume you. You were not quick to give so I had to learn to take for I would have gone hungry otherwise. It was easier to do so shrouded in the darkness of night as in the day you made sure you kept your distance. You once joked that children were parasites, and I think I took that too literally. You became too comfortable with the idea of me starving so I had to change my diet. A want for attention and care became all-encompassing to the point that once I swallowed a piece of you by mistake, it became the only way I knew to be satiated, even temporarily.

I am missing my left arm now,

You have scraped my head clean down to the bone.

I notice bite marks on my leg

from where I may have been able to

dislodge

your jaw from it in my sleep.

I am of the belief that mothers are the figures that provide, not the fathers. For there is nowhere she may go that I will not find her. She would not provide shelter when I looked for respite so now, I look for it in the inverse. Perhaps once she is gone, I will be satisfied – I am not certain. But until then, I will comfort myself, with just

one more bite.

About the Competition

The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar is a prestigious platform showcasing diverse voices from around the world. It celebrates the power of the written word, inviting submissions across various genres, including poetry, short stories, and essays. The competition fosters creativity and provides writers with an opportunity to share their unique perspectives on a global stage, enhancing the literary landscape with fresh and innovative narratives.

Thank you, Boitumelo (Tumi) Mogari, for sharing your compelling short story, "I Will Take/You Took," with us in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. Your exploration of identity and the intricate dynamics of relationships has offered readers a profound and introspective experience. We appreciate your contribution and look forward to seeing more of your evocative work in the future.

About Hashtag Kalakar

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