I broke my word to God-- for You - By Kausani Pal

Written By: Kausani Pal

Category: Poetry

Competition: Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

In a deeply moving contribution to the Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026, Kausani Pal presents "I broke my word to God-- for You." This poignant piece, submitted under the Poetry category, delves into themes of love, sacrifice, and divine conflict. Through the lens of personal devotion, Kausani explores the emotional turmoil and spiritual struggle that come with breaking a sacred promise. The poem is a testament to the lengths one might go in the name of love, capturing the essence of this year's competition theme with grace and intensity.

About the Work

Kausani Pal's poem is a rich tapestry of emotion, weaving themes of divine promise and personal sacrifice. The poem's mood is one of solemn reflection, capturing the narrator's internal conflict and ultimate decision to forsake divine allegiance for love. With vivid imagery of heavenly wings and the contrasting realms of heaven and hell, the poem evokes a powerful sense of longing and loss. Kausani's use of language and metaphor invites readers to ponder the depths of devotion and the price of breaking one's word for the sake of another.

I broke my word to God-- for You

Original Submission by Kausani Pal

I broke my Word to God- for You

God had once gifted-- a million wings

to me- of all the heavenly things,

For I had asked him-

If I could gift a pair- to you.

And so that we could fly

The skies highest of highs

And so, I could hear your laughter,

Ring through the clouds.

For you once had told me,

That the mightiest of beings

Would one day gift a pair-

To you.

And now- I had what you wanted.

But-how could I gift a pair to you?

For time never tries

To stop death, nor it's cries-

So, I just could find your grave.

And had no other way

To go around--

So, I looked up at heaven

And asked God, if I could have you back-

Even at the cost of my own life.

God doesn't answer,

As the most treacherous voice of the Devil,

Came from beneath me--

He said, he'd return you, if I would give--

Those million pairs of wings, in return to him.

But I had given my word-

To the most high-- the Lord

That would not let evil touch even a feather.

But, oh-- I broke my word, to God--

For you.

And walked through hell-

Like I had walked through heaven-

For you.

Yet kept a pair hidden- in my heart.

And brought you back, with the bargain sealed.

But God saw it all; and just as I took the pair-

Out from my heart, the soft feathers- turned to rigid glass,

And seared through my chest-

And, oh, as you saw with blood-red eyes

A devil who had strayed from God's own words-in pain die.

But did you ever wonder, that the lone feather-

That you gathered- as a memory,

Has the blood of the same devil-

Who once broke God's word-

For you?

About the Competition

The Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar offers a platform for writers to explore profound themes through the art of words. This esteemed competition invites participants from around the globe to express their creativity and delve into the heart of human experience. With categories ranging from Poetry to Short Stories, the competition celebrates the diverse voices and unique perspectives of writers, encouraging them to push the boundaries of their craft and explore the depths of their imagination.

We extend our heartfelt gratitude to Kausani Pal for sharing "I broke my word to God-- for You" with us as part of the Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. Your poignant exploration of love and sacrifice has left a lasting impression, inviting readers to reflect on the profound choices we make in the name of devotion. Thank you for contributing your voice and vision to this year's competition.

About Hashtag Kalakar

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