HIGH ACHIEVER CAN’T YOU SEE - By Neekita Nigam

Written By: neekita nigam

Category: poetry

Competition: Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

In the evocative poem "HIGH ACHIEVER CAN’T YOU SEE," Neekita Nigam offers a poignant exploration of the pressures and emotional struggles faced by high achievers. This entry in the Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 reveals a deep reflection on societal expectations. The competition, a celebration of creative expression, provides a platform for diverse voices like Neekita's, whose work resonates with themes of stress, identity, and the relentless pursuit of success.

About the Work

Neekita Nigam's poem delves into the emotional turmoil experienced by those striving for achievement. With vivid imagery and a reflective tone, the piece unravels the complex emotions tied to societal pressures. The work's introspective nature invites readers to ponder the cost of relentless ambition, questioning the true value of success when weighed against personal well-being.

HIGH ACHIEVER CAN’T YOU SEE

Original Submission by neekita nigam

HIGH ACHIEVER CAN’T YOU SEE

High Achiever, don't you see, your fate

Slowly dissolving in history's date.

As the shadows of stress surround,

Do we even know how our own tears make us drown?

As my energy slowly drains,

I slowly forget to even cry in pain.

I have to give death a bow,

While I lose my motherly figures now.

Chains are anchoring the naive legs,

We are trampled, it doesn't matter how much we beg. A child confident and proud,

It's an issue for the crowd.

How much did you score?

Please, we can't take it anymore.

God, oh God, if you exist, listen to my plea. This rat race is engulfing me.

As the emotionless corpse lies in bed,

eyes which are a stark tone of red.

So i ask again

High achiever can’t you see

Your life is above a sad plea

About the Competition

The Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar is a prestigious event inviting poets and writers globally to share their creative works. This competition fosters a rich tapestry of voices and themes, celebrating the art of storytelling and poetic expression. Participants showcase their talents in a supportive environment that honors creativity and individuality.

We extend our heartfelt thanks to Neekita Nigam for sharing "HIGH ACHIEVER CAN’T YOU SEE" with the Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. Neekita's poignant exploration of societal pressures provides valuable insight into the emotional landscape of high achievers. We appreciate the depth and thoughtfulness of your contribution.

About Hashtag Kalakar

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