her eyes - By Ethan Naidoo

Written By: Ethan Naidoo

Category: poetry

Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

Introducing Ethan Naidoo's poignant poem "her eyes," a compelling entry in the poetry category of the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. Through delicate verses, Naidoo explores the intricate dynamics of unrequited love and the emotional turbulence it brings. This submission gracefully delves into the complexities of longing and the bittersweet nature of human connection, resonating with readers on a deeply personal level.

About the Work

"her eyes" captures the essence of yearning and the delicate dance between desire and reality. With a narrative steeped in introspection, Ethan Naidoo employs vivid imagery and candid reflections to convey the heartache of loving someone who sees you only as a friend. The poem's emotional depth is enhanced by its contemplative tone and sincere expression of vulnerability, offering readers a window into the poet's innermost thoughts.

her eyes

Original Submission by Ethan Naidoo

Maybe it was her eyes, though I barely stared into them

but I can’t deny the butterflies,

her presence made it better both the highs and the lows

I know we made a deal, I hope I can amend it

I don’t want to be just a friend

when we say us I see a word in front of friend

she doesn’t, I'm just an easy number to dial

I'll be in denial for a little while

my heart’s a little brittle but I'm tired of the hospital

I know I'm wired differently, but is it wrong that I desired what I can’t have?

Maybe I'll go back to when I said hi with a pat on her head

even though I was threatened with a bat by a crybaby

I just like the way she struts like she’s the most important person in the room

I think that haircut would have suited her too but I’m somewhat biased

despite the highest level of corny humor

we take long walks but I want them to be lifelong

I prolong this song because I know she won’t be mine

I grew a spine though, maybe just once a wine and dine

but its fine lets just relive that night

nine shots, well one for you

perhaps its your height but you got a lot of fight in you with just a sip

you looked me in the eye and said lets take a flight

I want to be your knight but you treat me like a kite

you’re asleep right now and I'm left to write

lets take that flight

it feels right

why not tonight

let me live my delusion for a little longer

lets take another drive you’ll have to forgive me but you make me feel alive

my conclusion is a goodbye, watching you thrive from afar

why? Well, my heart wants you to have more than me

I won’t die, I'll just stare at the sky alone for awhile

maybe I have to be the bad guy

I still want to be by your side when you cry

I just can’t bare the bye

forget the rhyming

there was a boy that loved a girl

the girl didn’t love him

so the boy in agony stayed as close as she would let him

it sounds cruel but that boy had hope

while it hurt, being near her made it worth it

for the first time in his life he did not let fear dictate his actions

this boy often thought emotionless

fell in love

with a girl that looks past him

thank you god for emotion

even if it hurts like hell

I still think your name suits your eyes

About the Competition

The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026, hosted by Hashtag Kalakar, celebrates the art of written expression across diverse genres. This prestigious event provides a platform for writers worldwide to showcase their creativity and share their unique voices. Participants explore myriad themes, crafting narratives that resonate with audiences and contribute to the rich tapestry of contemporary literature.

We extend our heartfelt thanks to Ethan Naidoo for sharing "her eyes" with us in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. Your evocative exploration of unrequited love and emotional introspection has touched our hearts. We appreciate your contribution and look forward to witnessing more of your creative journey.

About Hashtag Kalakar

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