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Eersterivier - By Hilton Thomas

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Written By: Hilton Thomas

Category: Poetry

Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

Hilton Thomas, writing under the name Eersterivier, presents a poignant piece titled "Eersterivier" in the Poetry category. Featured in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar, this poem dives deep into the theme of change and loss. Through his evocative words, Hilton explores the transformation of a once peaceful town into a place marked by violence and despair. His work invites readers to reflect on the impact of societal shifts and the loss of innocence.

About the Work

"Eersterivier" is a powerful reflection on the transformation of a community. Hilton Thomas uses vivid imagery and a somber tone to depict the stark contrast between past and present. The poem's narrative style captures the essence of a town once thriving with harmony, now overshadowed by turmoil. Through his expressive language, Hilton evokes a deep sense of nostalgia and mourning, urging readers to contemplate the societal changes that have led to such a dramatic transformation.

Eersterivier

Original Submission by Hilton Thomas

Eersterivier

Oh, whatever has become of you, Eersterivier?

Not a sniff left of the quiet, peaceful town of once.

Pray tell, what is it that has turned the tide for you,

when now, personal safety has become a swear word?

You’ve turned into the biblical mourning Jerusalem,

calling on travelers to take heed of your sorrows.

Or are you rather the image of the Gaza of today?

For gunfire of kin and foreigner rules the hour.

Years past, home-grown ubuntu nurtured your all,

with every village and heights supporting this lovingly.

Sadly now, disaster is the keeper of them and more,

because their cloth of safety has been burnt and buried.

Your children are taken out any day, every day, relentlessly.

Seemingly, innocence or guilt matters not in violence.

The blood of your sons and daughters cannot dry,

because the earth is constantly saturated with life fluid.

Again then, Eersterivier, what has become of you?

Not long ago, you were the best address this side of town.

Now, drugs and murder seem to be the purpose of life.

Eersterivier, my abode of choice, what has become of you?

Hilton C. Thomas

About the Competition

The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar is a prestigious platform celebrating the art of writing. It provides writers worldwide an opportunity to showcase their talent and creativity. This competition is known for its diverse range of categories, encouraging participants to express their unique voices and perspectives on a global stage. It continues to inspire and nurture the literary community by offering a space for thoughtful and impactful storytelling.

We extend our heartfelt thanks to Hilton Thomas for his poignant contribution, "Eersterivier," to the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. His reflective poem provides a deep insight into the societal changes affecting communities. We are grateful for his participation and look forward to seeing more of his evocative work in the future.

About Hashtag Kalakar

Hashtag Kalakar is a creative platform dedicated to providing artists, writers, singers and other creative talents with opportunities to showcase their work and reach wider audiences through competitions, features and creative initiatives.

 
 
 

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