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Dear Radha

By Deekshith.S


CHAPTER 1 - WRITER MWEETS WRITER  

TIME : MORNING  

LOCATION : ANY ONE BUILDING & STREET  

EXT.STREET  

(NISCHAl NISCHAL WALKS IN THE STREET WITH A BAG AT HIS SHOULDER SILENTLY AND FINDS THE HOME WHICH HE WANTED TO GO AND STANDS NEAR THE GATE, ONE GUY IS DOING WORK IN THE GARDEN...)  

 NISCHAL NIHAL : 

Ha brother idu writer jeeva kumar avr mane na.   THE GUY :  

Illa marre munde hogi.  

(NISCHAL STARTS WAKLING...) 

 THE GUY :  

Ayo nilli brother comedy madiddu edu jeeva kumar na mane ne nan avn freind alle mahadi mele iddane hogi meet aagi... 

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Already susth agidini bro adralli nimd bere.  

 THE GUY :  

Sumne tamashe hogi alli mele alle idane jeeva kumar. 

(NISCHAL NIHAL CLIMBS THE STAIRS AND GO THE TOP FLOOR AND HE SEES THE JEEVA KUMAR ON TOP TOP FLOOR BOOKS AND PAPER ON SMALL TABLE JEEVA KUMAR IS ADMIRING THE BEAUTY OF THE CITY & NATURE...) 

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Hi sir.  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Namaste, nan en dodd manushya alla I am also very young you can call me brother.  

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Niv tumba simple sir adru niv madiro acheivements est chikk vayasalli tumba doddadu I will call you sir.

2. 

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Irli banni kuntkoli tea coffee enadru tagoltira or else any cold drinks.  

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

No sir nang enu beda just nim jothe matadbeku aste saku.  JEEVA KUMAR :  

I am here, matadi en matadbeku.  

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Ha sir adu nimdu second book recently odidde atara nan modlu ellu odilla superb sir. 

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Thank you very much.  

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Sir henge sir naanu writer agbeku anta tumba aase ide neev henge sir ist young age alle ist dodd writer agidira nangu heli sir.  

(JEEVA KUMAR STANDS FROM CHAIR WITH A SMILE AND SEES SKY...)   JEEVA KUMAR :  

Ee preethi matte hudgir kannu everedu olle meenen bale iddange aase torsi torsi sayisodu.  

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Sir arta agilla sir niv en heludri anta swalpa bidsi heltira. 

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Nan writer agiddu aa ondu hudgi inda avle nanna devathe.   NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Sir nimdu love story itta wow great, sir please sir aa story na kelbouda niv ellu helilla, elli sir aa nim hudgi  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Nan preethi ontara ee tungabhadra dam iddange alli est hudkudru akade dadha kansalla nan preethi este hudkidru matte sigalla.  

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Sir niv matadodu ella olle kavithe tara irutte enu arta agilla sir. 

3. 

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Parvagilla nan kathe nimg heltini.  

(JEEVA KUMAR STANDS STILL SEEING THE CITY...)  (VOICEOVER POEM, CHAPTER - 1, WRITER MEETS WRITER)  FADE TO BLACK... 

CHAPTER 2 : THE LAKE VISIT  

TIME : MORNING & AFTERNOON  

LOCATION : TEMPLE 

EXT.TEMPLE  

FADE IN FROM BLACK SCREEN... 

(JEEVA KUMAR IS STANDING INFRONT OF TEMPLE SEEING ENTRANCE AND GOES INSIDE AND CAMERA FOOLOWS JEEVA KUMAR GOES AND MEETS ASTROLOGER...)  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Gurugale adu ond problem ittu.  

 ASTROLOGER :  

Helu enu ninna samasye enadru salahe beka. 

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Gurugale nan ellar nu care madtini preethi madthini yaru dwesha madalla adre nanna elru bitt hogtare yaru nanna care ee madalla.  

 ASTROLGER :  

Elli nin kai kodilli, ayo shey nin tumba duradrusta kanayya nin bere avrige este care madudru avr matra ninna care madalla, nan helod en andre care madode bitt bidu. 

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Hagadre ee janmadalli nange preethi sigalva gurugale.   ASTROLGER :  

Kasta ide devre yavdadru pavada madbeku aste.   JEEVA KUMAR :  

Sari aytu gurugale nan inn bartini tagoli duddu. 

4. 

(JEEVA KUMAR WAKES UP EYES ARE TEARY RED JEEVA IS IN PAIN COMES OUTSUDE OF TEMPLE SEES AROUND IN ONE CORNER GOES AND SIT IN PAIN JEEVA KUMAR WILL SLEEP THERE ONLY...)  

POV OF JEEVA KUMAR ANGLE : CAMERA SLOWLY FADE OUT FROM BLUR AS JEEVA KUMAR OPENS EYES AND SEES A BEAUTIFUL GIRL IS STANDING AND JEEVA KUMAR WAKES UP 

 NAVYA R : 

Yar sir neevu devasthana atra malgidira, kudididira.   JEEVA KUMAR : 

Ayo illa nange atara abhyasa illa just life felt heavy and I fallen here.  

 NAVYA R :  

Oh sorry niv devasthana atra so adikke bejar agilla taane.  JEEVA KUMAR :  

Ayo sorry ella en beda be chill.  

 NAVYA R :  

Actually nan ee urige hosablu astond enu gotilla.   JEEVA KUMAR :  

Oh ok welcome to our city.  

 NAVYA R :  

Hmm thanks ee uralli ondu kere ide tumba chennag ide anta yaro heludru please nanna allige karkond hogtira.  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Karkond eno hogboudu ee kaaldalli hudgir hudgur na nodudre ne hedrukotare antadralli will you come with.  

 NAVYA R :  

Nim mukha nodudre ne gottagutte niv est innocent anta olle paapu tara idira adikke I felt safe with you.  

(JEEVA KUMAR SMILES NAVYA R SMILES SLOWLY FADES INTO BLACK...) 

EXT.LAKE  

(JEEVA KUMAR AND NAVYA R SEEING THE BEAUTIFUL BREATHTAKING VIEW OF LAKE...)  

 

5. 

 NAVYA R :  

Wow nan life alle ist chennag iro kere nodilla what a experience, thank you mr jeeva.  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Nam oor andre ne haage swarga idu nange bejar adag ella ee kere atra barta irtini.  

 NAVYA R :  

Astond suffer madtidira astond kasta nim life.   JEEVA KUMAR :  

Almost ella middle class hudgur jeevna full kasta ne nim hudgir life tumba easy odilla andre madve madi kalistare nam boys ge bere yav option uu illa.  

 NAVYA R :  

Howdu jeeva nin heliddu nija hudgir life tumba simple jaasti en illa, nav ista patidd batte hakoku freedom illa, maneli aache hogbeda yake enu anta keltare aste, obre odadoku swatantra illa beedili kelu nayigalu joll surskondu kayitirtave, odidru madve ode idru madve otnalli appana mane bittu hogbeku ganda ollevno kettono illa enu nodalla, nam preethina padiyo hakku namgilla, social media dalli kett comments bere, iste hudgir life easy ne.  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Ayo nan haage helilla illi yar life uu easy illa ade reality both boys and girls.  

 NAVYA R :  

Adu neeja ne mr jeeva kumar (SMILES)... 

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Nim sweet name enu anta hele illa inna.  

 NAVYA R :  

Hmm nam appa amma nang ittid hesru navya r anta.   JEEVA KUMAR : 

Wow sakatt agi ide nim hesru navya r, r andre rukmini or radha.  

 NAVYA R :  

You are trying to flirt with me mr jeeva kumar 

6. 

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Ayo atara illa just curuios kelde aste ista illa andre helbedi bidi. 

 NAVYA R : 

Hmm adu samaya ne tilsutte adu ide jagadalli wait and watch.  JEEVA KUMAR :  

0h niv olle kavithe tara matadtira navya avre.  (BOTH SMILES...)  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Oh soundarya  

Ee jeevakke neenu anivarya  

Nee illade ee jeevana vyartha  

Nee iddare nanna jeevana ondu arta... 

(BOTH ARE SEEING THE BEAUTIFUL LAKE AND SCREEN FADES INTO BLACK SLOWLY...) 

CHAPTER 3 - THE CHAOS OF STREET  

TIME : AFTERNOON  

LOCATION : STREET  

EXT.STREET  

(JEEVA KUMAR AND NAVYA R WALKING IN THE NARROW STREET THE SLOW MOTION BOTH ARE LAUGHING AND TALKING SUDDENLY 2 BOYS COMES AND ONE BOY TOUCHES THE WAIST OF NAVYA R AND PASS...) 

 NAVYA R :  

Oyii heng aytr mai ge.  

 ONE BOY : 

Ohh akka film dailogue hoditavle.  

 NAVYA R :  

Oyii nan hudga yaru anta gotta ille pakka nintavne nodi nim nella film alli hero tara hoditane be careful. 

7. 

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Ayo naana  

 NAVYA R :  

Hu neene yake nin navya na neenu kapadalva helu.  JEEVA KUMAR :  

Adu atara alla sari barro adre ond sari ge obne barbeku 1 v 1 no duo rush. 

 ONE BOY :  

Aye ninn nim kannige nav en joker tara kansta idiva.  

(FIRST ONE GUY RUSHES AND HOLDS THE COLLOR OF JEEVA KUMAR...) 

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Ayo ayo ayo hosa shirt kano please kano bido le, yappa bido le (IN FUNNY WAY)...  

(JEEVA KUMAR PUNCHES THE STOMACH OF ONE BOY HE FALLS DOWN IN PAIN NAVYA R IS NOW ENJOYING THIS...)  

 SECOND BOY :  

Anna hodidbitnalla anno aye ning ayte kano.  

(JEEVA KUMAR MISSES THE PUNCHES OF SECOND GUY AND BEAT SECOND BOY HEAD NOW BOTH ARE FALLEN...)  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Nan makla nodoke innocent face anta underestimate madtira hariyo kaveri nadi nu mel inda shanta vaagi ne hariyodu adre olige ilid mele ne gottagadu kaveri shakti enu anta, anta neer kudidu beldiro nang est irbeda. 

 NAVYA R :  

Super dailogue but ello yavdo movie li keliro tara anstide.   JEEVA KUMAR :  

Howda navya iga nodu, henmaklu anta andre nim mane aata saman ankond idira maneli lakshmi saraswathi photo ittu pooje madod alla bhatkthi nijvaglu bakthi ide andre bere mane henmaklu na devathe tara nodi aaga nam desha nu mundvariyutte. 

 NAVYA R :  

Idu super mr jeeva kumar I liked it nin inna ond love lesson na kaltbitte great.

8. 

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Thank you navya ella nin indane adru chennag ittu.  NAVYA R :  

Chennag itta enu chennag ittu fighting aa.  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Alla nivu nanna nim hudga andiddu matte hero andiddu.   NAVYA R :  

Again flirting started aa nan eno nan protection ge aste heliddu.  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Howda adre nan ninna heg nodtidini gotta nan pranakinta hechagi nin nan nam amma navya.  

 NAVYA R :  

Kariya 2 movie na naanu nodidini mr jeeva kumar.  (BOTH SMILES AND WALK CLOSER IN THE NARROW STREET...) FADE INTO BLACK... 

CHAPTER 4 : THE ANGEL  

TIME : EVENING  

LOCATION : THE LAKE  

EXT.LAKE  

(BOTH JEEVA KUMAR AND NAVYA R SEEING THE LAKE AND IN SILENCE CAMERA FOCUSES FROM BACKWARDS ON THEM...)  

 NAVYA R : 

Ee place estu chennag ide est sari bandru matte matte barbeku ansutte.  

 JEEVA KUMAR : 

Alva adikke heliddu ee jagakke nange bejar adag ella bartini anta.  

(NAVYA R SEES THAT JEEVA KUMAR IS HOLDING A LETTER IN HIS HANDS NAVYA R TRIES TO TAKE THAT JEEVA KUMAR HIDES AND JEEVA KUMAR AND NAVYA R PLAYS LIKE CHILDREN BY RUNNING NAVYA R TRYING TO SNATCH THAT LETTER JEEVA KUMAR HIDING...) 

9. 

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Ok ok navya letter alli enide anta naane heltini. JEEVA KUMAR STARTS TO READ THE POEM CHAPTER 4, POEM 1...  NAVYA R :  

Wow idunna nangoskara bardra jeeva avre I can't belive thank you very much.  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

(KNEELS DOWN) aste alla navya, you just proven astrology wrong, navya rukmini I love you now and forever. 

(NAVYA R STARTS TO CRY AND HUGS JEEVA KUMAR...)   NAVYA R :  

Nanna nijvaglu preethi madtidya jeeva nan illa andru iro shakthi ning idya helu.  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Navya ega neenu amruthvarshini film niveditha jain tara matadtidya.  

(NOW HUG COMES TO AN AND BOTH STANDS...) 

 NAVYA R :  

Nan serious aage keliddu nan irde nin kushiyagi irtya taane.   JEEVA KUMAR :  

Ee jeeva anno hesrige arta tandidde neenu navya ee jeevakke jeeva tandavalu neenu ega bitt hodre ee nin jeeva matte nirjeeva agtane.  

 NAVYA R : 

(STARTS CRYING MORE) I can't nan yaru anta heltini I am an angel from heaven just nin nodade iro preethi na torsi paata helkottu matte vapas hogoke bandiddu.  

 JEEVA KUMAR  

Hey navya comedy madbeda neene nan destiny anta nang gottu.  

(NAVYA R BY SHAKING HEAD CRYING WALKS FAR SLOWLY BY SEEING JEEVA KUMAR NOW JEEVA HOLDS THE HEART TEARS FLOWS AND FALL UNCONSIOUS ON GROUND...)  

FADE INTO BLACK... 

(POV OF JEEVA KUMAR CAMERA ANGLE SLOWLY FROM BLURRY EYES SEES HIS NAVYA NOW SHE IS LITRELLY IN GODDESS OUTFIT THE ANGEL TOUCHES THE HAIRS OF JEEVA KUMAR ONE LAST TIME AND

10. 

DISSAPPEAR FOREVER...) 

(JEEVA KUMAR WAKES UP COMPLETELY SEES AROUND SHOUTS NAVYA R NAME CRIES HARDER AND STARTS RUNNING TOWARDS THE TEMPLE WHERE JEEVA KUMAR MET NAVYA R GOES AND SIT BY CRYING IN THE SAME PLACE WHERE JEEVA KUMAR SEEN NAVYA R...)  

FADE INTO BLACK... 

CHAPTER 5 : THE CONFUSION  

TIME : MORNING  

LOCATION : HOUSE TOP FLOOR  

(BACK TO THE NISCHAL NIHAL AND JEEVA KUMAR CONVERSATION JEEVA KUMAR IS STILL SEEING SKY AND SAYS A POEM...) 

CHAPTER - 5, POEM - 1  

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Sir idu nijvaglu nim jothe agiro incident aa seriously namboke agtilla.  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

It's your choice nambodu bidodu adre navya anno angel bandu hogirodu sathya avle nanna writer na agi maadi hogiddu nan devathe avl, navya rukmini ankond idde she was my navya radha preethiya swarga torsi hodavalu avlu. 

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Ayo sir nan haage helilla nan nim jothe nadidiro kathe atva incident na nambtini if you don't mind ee oppertunity na nanige kodi sir niv nim love story bagge book bardilla nan aa book baritini nimgoskara sir. 

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Sure brother you can write neenu ond olle writer agbeku aste. 

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Thank you so much sir, amele book hesru en anta idodu neeve heli sir.  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Haa my dear radha anta idi super irutte. 

11. 

  

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Thank you so much sir idu nan life na magical expereince nim jothe matadiddu nan inn bartini sir.  

 JEEVA KUMAR :  

Olled agli next nim book punlishing time alli sigana.  

(NISCAHL NIHAL SMILES AND CLIMBS DOWN THE STAIRS AND HE SEES THE GUY JEEVA KUMAR FREIND IS STILL WORKING IN GARDEN...) 

 THE GUY :  

Meet madudra bro nim favourate writer na en matadudri.   NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Yes brother nan life na best experirnce avr jothe matadiddu matte avr love story na bariyoke nange permission kottavre nan antu happy.  

 THE GUY :  

Ohh love story navya devathe angel anta ella helidane alva jeeva.  

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Haa bro ade jeeva sir heliddu ad nimgu gotta. 

 THE GUY :  

Papa nam jeeva avnige yaaru care maade irlilla aaga nam mane pakka ond mane kaali ittu allige navya anno hudgi matte avr family bandidru daily aa hudgi nam jeeva jothe eye contact madtidlu adre yavattu matadilla idunna preethi ankondu avnu kavithe bariyoke start madida ond dina ratro ratri navya matte avr family mane kaali maadi horthodru idunna ee novv na sayisoke agillla avn kai li adru avlu devathe anta heloke start madida iga writer agavne.  

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Oh howda sir heliddu ella avra imagination story na.   THE GUY :  

Bari imagination adru avn bari avla kannige bidda varthu avl body na nodi alla idu true love andre adu nam jeeva inda nodi kalibeku ond henn na devathe tara nododu idu true love andre, ella hudgur nam jeeva tara agodre nam desha ond raatri le change agibiditte brother.  

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

Sari brother nan inn bartini bye (IN CONFUSION...) 

12. 

 NISCHAL NIHAL :  

(MIND VOICEOVER WHILE WALKING BACK IN STREET...) 

Nan favourate writer jeeva sir sull heludra atva avr freind heludra yavd nambodu yavd bidodu adre bari eye contact inda love agi writer agoku saadya illa miracle agbeku aste at the same time ee angel heaven idunnu namboke agtilla, yar irboudu ee navya.  

BLACK SCREEN FADES IN... 

IS NAVYA JUST A GIRL OR ANGEL FROM HEAVEN ? 

FADE OUT... 

 THANK YOU


By Deekshith.S


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