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Bottle

Jan 11, 2025
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Updated: Jul 17, 2025


By Priya Patel


ontext: This poem is actually a short story of a king and a girl who could never be together but they left a message in the bottle in the sea to remind themselves of their love in the next life.]

(Place: Seashore)

Girl:

Do you remember?

The message in the bottle.

We left it in the sea.

And I hope you to be here.

Together we would see,

Life would be so precious.

If you would be next to me,

Life would be so special.

Message in the bottle says,

“This water Suffocates,

Landed in the right hand.

I found the queen and

That’s the king right behind.

I kept the rings inside,

Safer from the sadness.

Go put the rings on,

Go hold your hands tight.

Don’t look backwards,

Be the happiest groom and bride.

Your Highness,

My duty is over.

Now, I can take a leave,

As both of you’re finally together.”


By Priya Patel




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