Would it still be so beautiful? - By Ilamdeep Kaur

Written By: Ilamdeep Kaur

Category: Poetry

Competition: Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

In the evocative poem "Would it still be so beautiful?" by Ilamdeep Kaur, we are invited to reflect on the intrinsic beauty born from life's challenges. This poignant piece is part of the Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 hosted by Hashtag Kalakar. Through a series of vivid natural images, the poem explores the interplay between beauty and adversity, questioning whether the absence of obstacles would alter the allure of the world around us.

About the Work

Ilamdeep Kaur's poem delves into the theme of beauty emerging through adversity. With a lyrical narrative, the poem uses natural imagery such as rivers, rainbows, and oceans to symbolize life's trials and the resulting beauty. The work is both introspective and philosophical, encouraging readers to appreciate the scars and struggles that shape our existence. The rhythm and rhyme create a soothing flow that enhances the reflective mood of the piece.

Would it still be so beautiful?

Original Submission by Ilamdeep Kaur

Would It Still Be So Beautiful?

The river sounds so sweet,

With rocks beneath its feet.

Without them in its way,

Would it sound the same today?

The rainbow comes after the rain,

With every colour in its lane.

Without the clouds, without the grey,

Would it shine the same way?

The water starts so high above,

Then loses what it once had loved.

If it never had to fall,

Would we call it beautiful at all?

Lightning cracks the sky at night,

And suddenly the dark is bright.

Without those cracks up in the sky,

Would it look as pretty to the eye?

The ocean shapes the shell each day,

With every wave that comes its way.

It leaves its scars upon its side,

Would it be so beautiful without the tide?

The river taught me to find my way,

The rainbow to wait for brighter days.

The waterfall showed me falling isn’t all,

The lightning made beauty out of every fall.

And the shell wore every scar with pride,

So maybe I need my own storms and tides.

If I had never stumbled or fallen,

If I had never faced it all,

Would I still be so beautiful?

About the Competition

The Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar celebrates the diverse voices and creative talents of writers worldwide. This esteemed event provides a platform for participants to showcase their artistic expressions in poetry and creative writing, fostering a vibrant community of literary enthusiasts. While the competition emphasizes creativity and originality, it remains a testament to the power of the written word.

We extend our heartfelt thanks to Ilamdeep Kaur for sharing "Would it still be so beautiful?" with us in the Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. This insightful poem is a beautiful reminder of the resilience found in nature and in ourselves. We are grateful for the opportunity to feature such thoughtful work.

About Hashtag Kalakar

Hashtag Kalakar is a creative platform dedicated to providing artists, writers, singers and other creative talents with opportunities to showcase their work and reach wider audiences through competitions, features and creative initiatives.