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Used to be so pure - By Elizma van der Vyver

Aug 14
2 min read

Written By: Elizma van der Vyver

Category: Poetry

Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

In "Used to be so pure," Elizma van der Vyver, writing under the name Pure, offers a poignant exploration of innocence and self-discovery through poetry. This evocative piece is part of the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026, showcasing her unique voice and introspective themes. The poem delves into the journey from naivety to a complex understanding of oneself, resonating with readers who appreciate candid reflections on personal growth.

About the Work

The poem "Used to be so pure" by Elizma van der Vyver is a raw and introspective exploration of the transition from innocence to experience. Through vivid imagery and a reflective tone, the poem captures the inner turmoil and self-questioning that accompany personal growth. The work's candid style invites readers to ponder their own journeys and the moments that define them, making it a powerful piece of creative writing.

Pure

Original Submission by Elizma van der Vyver

Used to be so pure

always very sure

Thought I was mature

but then everything turned into a blur something inside me started to stir Should have stayed an amateur

Instead became used

internally confused

Got intertwined and bound

lost the sweet sound

of peace of mind

thought I was kind

how could I be so blind?

Worn, torn and reborn

turned out to be a thorn

a loss I have to mourn

What does this constitute?

A prostitute

using the body as a servitude Why didn’t you contribute?

Can you please restitute

My obsequence

was the consequence of your persistence

Made me a hypocrite Was I just a counterfeit? A pleasure

you could not treasure?

About the Competition

The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar is a prestigious event that celebrates the diverse voices of writers worldwide. It serves as a platform for emerging and established writers to share their work with a global audience, fostering creativity and literary excellence. The competition spans various categories, inviting participants to explore themes that resonate personally and universally.

We extend our gratitude to Elizma van der Vyver for sharing "Used to be so pure" with us. Her participation in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 adds depth to the collective exploration of identity and self-discovery. We look forward to seeing more of her evocative poetry in the future.

About Hashtag Kalakar

Hashtag Kalakar is a creative platform dedicated to providing artists, writers, singers and other creative talents with opportunities to showcase their work and reach wider audiences through competitions, features and creative initiatives.

 
 
 

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