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The Sunset And The Drawing

Updated: Mar 13, 2024

By Shibumi Desai


At sunset,

The sky plays out like a palette of myriad shades,

Going from yellow to orange to pink to purple,

In shades only nature can create.


Almost everyone at some point, makes a sunset drawing.


In the drawing,

There are some mountains which are brown,

(If people bother a little more they’re snow-capped),

There’s the sun setting between them.

Maybe a waterfall running down them,

Maybe a green field below.


At sunset,

The birds fly past,

With their songs and styles of flying,

Black outlines of so many shapes,

with a flash of green if you’re lucky —

All as different as the colours in the sky.



In the drawing,

At the top, the sky is white or plain blue,

(People often bother more here and use many different shades as well),

And there are always some V-shapes for birds,

Reducing them to nothing but black lines.


Let’s make the drawing again,

Not of a sunset,

But from a sunset.


Because black lines on their own can say such a lot,

But the birds in the sky -

Making the glide into their nests like a grand finale,

for us to see, almost every day -

deserve so much more.


Let’s only capture how they fly,

And we may find our own wings…


By Shibumi Desai



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Kriti Tiwari
Kriti Tiwari
Oct 16, 2023
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Loved reading it!

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Gita Choksi
Gita Choksi
Oct 15, 2023
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Perchance a is this poem reminiscing of your childhood holidays in Panchgani?

The picture painted in words "from the sunset" says it all

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Dr Joe George
Dr Joe George
Oct 15, 2023
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Excellent👍

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haavrusk
Oct 14, 2023
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

Beautifully written

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Sharyu Chute
Sharyu Chute
Oct 13, 2023
Rated 5 out of 5 stars.

just what I needed to read today! Thank you

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