The Last Ticket - By Avika Jha

Written By: Avika Jha

Category: Short story

Competition: Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

Avika Jha presents "The Last Ticket," a touching short story that delves into the themes of reflection and human connection. As part of the Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026, this narrative invites readers on a journey through the eyes of a retiring ticket checker. With its evocative imagery and poignant moments, the story captures the essence of life’s significant, yet often overlooked, encounters.

About the Work

"The Last Ticket" by Avika Jha is a narrative rich with emotion and introspection. The story unfolds aboard the Sarojini Express, where the protagonist, a retiring ticket checker, encounters passengers who reflect his past and present life. Through vivid descriptions and thoughtful dialogue, Jha explores themes of regret, fulfillment, and the universal search for meaning. The story leaves readers contemplating the profound impact of seemingly mundane interactions.

The Last Ticket

Original Submission by Avika Jha

The Last Ticket

Avika Jha

“Life is a one-way journey where the real tragedy isn’t death, but living without truly seeing, feeling, or fulfilling what matters.”

On an unusually bright afternoon, the Sarojini Express seemed almost restless, as if even its iron body could feel the sun pressing down on it. The general compartment was, as always, overflowing. Bodies leaned into bodies, voices tangled with heat, and luggage fought for space like it had a will of its own.

I adjusted my cap and stepped in.

“Tickets, please.”

For twenty-five years, my voice carried authority. Today, it carried something else… something closer to farewell.

The general compartment was never my favourite. Too crowded. Too unpredictable. Too human. People here did not follow rules, they followed necessity. I had spent years learning how to move through them without really seeing them.

But today, I wanted to see.

Most passengers avoided my gaze. Some pretended to sleep. A few shuffled nervously. I moved carefully, stepping over stretched legs and bags that had long given up on being organised.

Then a voice called out, gentle but firm.

“Sir, here is my ticket.”

I turned.

An old woman sat near the window, her saree faded but neatly draped, her hands trembling slightly as she held out the ticket. Her smile was unguarded, almost childlike.

I took it from her.

“Benaras?” I asked. “Why are you going there?”

Her eyes lit up.

“My son… he works in Delhi. He’s a mechanic. He works very hard. He sent me… to see Kashi.”

There was pride in her voice. And something else. Fulfillment, perhaps.

I nodded, returning her ticket.

For a moment, her face blurred… and another appeared.

My mother.

Bent over someone else’s floor, scrubbing away a life that never gave her pause. Feeding me, raising me, pushing me forward with hands that had no time for themselves.

She had once said she wanted to see Kashi.

I had said, “Someday, I’ll take you.”

Someday never came.

The train lurched forward. I steadied myself.

The old woman smiled again. I couldn’t.

A sudden bump jolted me.

A boy, no older than seven, had crashed into my side. He looked up at me with wide, startled eyes, then immediately turned to watch the rushing landscape outside the window, as if the world beyond the bars was more real than the one inside.

“Why are you running like this? Where are your parents?” I asked, sharper than I intended.

He didn’t answer. Just smiled faintly… and ran off again, brushing past people like wind slipping through cracks.

Something about him stayed.

Dhruv.

My son had the same restless eyes. The same curiosity that made everything seem new. He had once sat beside me and asked, “Papa, what do I need to do to become a ticket checker like you?”

I had laughed then.

He never grew old enough to find out.

Pneumonia, the doctor had said. Just like that.

The train rattled louder, as if disagreeing with the simplicity of it.

Near the connecting passage, where the compartments breathed into each other, I paused.

A young bride sat by the washbasin, her red dupatta pulled low over her face. Glass bangles chimed softly as she adjusted her hands.

“Are you travelling alone?” I asked.

She shook her head.

“My husband… he’s in the bathroom.”

Her voice was barely there.

The flush sounded. A man stepped out.

And for a moment, the train stopped.

Not physically. But something inside me did.

He looked like me.

Not exactly. But enough.

Same nervous shoulders. Same uncertain eyes. Same stubborn jaw that tried to hide fear behind silence.

We stared at each other.

He looked afraid. I felt… something else.

Recognition.

“What do you do for work?” I asked.

“Labourer,” he said quickly, as if confession would cost him something.

“Do you like it?”

He hesitated. Then shook his head.

“No, sir.”

I studied him.

There was a time when I had stood just like that. Freshly married. No direction. No certainty. Just movement… hoping it would lead somewhere.

“Would you like to work as a ticket checker?” I asked.

He almost laughed. “I don’t have the qualifications, sir.”

I stepped closer.

“I’ll recommend you.”

His eyes widened. Hope flickered, fragile but alive.

He nodded.

Behind him, the bride smiled quietly.

I moved on.

But something had shifted.

The compartments no longer felt crowded. They felt… familiar.

Too familiar.

The old woman. The boy. The young man.

Pieces.

Fragments.

Reflections.

After a total of twenty six stops, I heard the announcement…

“Next station… Ranchi Junction…”

The announcement crackled through the speakers.

Final stop.

Passengers began gathering their belongings in a rush, as if the train might change its mind and keep them forever.

I stood still.

For the first time in years, I did not ask for tickets.

For the first time in years, no one offered them.

The train slowed.

Stopped.

Doors opened.

People stepped out… one by one.

The boy ran ahead, disappearing into the crowd.

The young couple stepped down together, the man glancing back once… almost like gratitude.

Then they were gone.

All of them.

Gone.

The compartment emptied.

Silence settled.

I looked down at my hand.

My puncher.

Still.

Unused.

For the first time… unnecessary.

I stepped off the train.

The platform was quieter than it should have been.

Strangely familiar.

I looked up.

The yellow board stood still, unapologetic in its truth.

“DELHI JUNCTION”

Not Ranchi.

Where the journey had begun.

A voice echoed behind me.

“Ticket, please?”

I turned.

A young ticket checker stood there.

Cap slightly crooked. Eyes uncertain.

My eyes.

He looked at me, waiting.

I searched my pockets.

Nothing.

No ticket.

He hesitated.

Then smiled, gently.

“It’s alright… you can go.”

And for the first time in twenty-five years,

I walked past a ticket checker…

without knowing where I was headed.

About the Competition

The Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar celebrates diverse voices in literature. This esteemed competition provides a platform for writers to showcase their talent and share compelling narratives with a wide audience. Participants from around the world contribute to a collection of thought-provoking works that highlight creativity and storytelling prowess.

We extend our heartfelt thanks to Avika Jha for sharing "The Last Ticket" with us. Her participation in the Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 brings a unique and moving perspective to the collection. We hope her story inspires readers to cherish the moments and connections that define our journeys.

About Hashtag Kalakar

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