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Remembrance - By Chiné van der Merwe

Aug 13
2 min read

Updated: Aug 14

Written By: Chiné van der Merwe

Category: Poetry

Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

In the thought-provoking poem "Remembrance," Chiné van der Merwe delves into themes of longing and reflection, contributing to the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. As a participant in this prestigious event, van der Merwe explores the deep emotions tied to sympathy and memory. The poem invites readers to ponder their own capacity for empathy and understanding, serving as a poignant reminder of the unseen struggles that others may endure.

About the Work

"Remembrance" weaves a tapestry of emotion through its stark imagery and raw, expressive language. Chiné van der Merwe captures a profound sense of longing and reflection, urging readers to confront their own empathy. The poem's vivid imagery and heartfelt plea create a haunting atmosphere, drawing the audience into a world of unseen pain and the desire for acknowledgment. This work challenges us to reflect on our interactions with others and the sympathies we extend.

Remembrance

Original Submission by Chiné van der Merwe

Remembrance

is there sympathy left to spare?

how could there be?

when all i ever was is unseen


i knelt out of need but all You did was listen to

my pleas

if You could, you’d pay to watch me b

l

e

e

d

i watch over you reading with trembling hands- where is my owed sympathy?

my flesh followed long after my spirit died. still i will apologise

i am sorry

imagine my black and blue knees, scars on my thighs, ribs poking through and bags under my eyes


don’t just look

study them


is this enough now?

after experiencing it too?

is this finally enough for you?


if the metallic stench nauseates you, if my so-called selfishness infuriates you-

Oh, you feel you could have done more you should have

you. could. have.


above all

protect this letter

swallow your tears, do not cause the ink to fade


remember My red-soaked memory

and cry and sob and scream


then go ahead

give yourself the sympathy you never gave Me

About the Competition

The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar celebrates the power of the written word, bringing together talented writers from across the globe. This annual event offers poets and writers a platform to showcase their work, exploring diverse themes and styles. Participants have the opportunity to share their unique voices with a broad audience, contributing to a rich tapestry of contemporary creative expression.

We extend our heartfelt thanks to Chiné van der Merwe for sharing "Remembrance" with us in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. This evocative piece offers a powerful exploration of empathy and memory, leaving a lasting impression on all who read it. We look forward to seeing more from this talented poet in the future.

About Hashtag Kalakar

Hashtag Kalakar is a creative platform dedicated to providing artists, writers, singers and other creative talents with opportunities to showcase their work and reach wider audiences through competitions, features and creative initiatives.

 
 
 

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