Metamorphosis - By Wendy Greeff

Written By: Wendy Greeff

Category: Short Story

Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

In the realm of evocative storytelling, Wendy Greeff presents her short story "Metamorphosis," a gripping entry in the Short Story category of the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. This narrative delves into the profound emotional turmoil and personal transformation of an individual grappling with unrequited love and internal conflict. Greeff's poignant exploration invites readers to confront the depths of human emotion and the complex journey toward self-liberation.

About the Work

"Metamorphosis" unravels with a raw, introspective lens, capturing a character's struggle with emotional pain and the desperate pursuit of relief. The story's intense mood is underscored by vivid imagery and a reflective narrative style, drawing readers into the protagonist's world. The theme of personal metamorphosis is woven throughout, highlighting the tension between vulnerability and resilience, and offering a glimpse into the cathartic power of facing one's inner demons.

Metamorphosis

Original Submission by Wendy Greeff

METAMORPHOSIS

I swallow hard. It’s doing it that I fear the most, not the inevitable aftermath. I’ve come to terms with those aspects, and they no longer bother me. The real hurdle will be that moment when I make steel slice skin: when flesh first falls open in a bloodless mouth before the redness rises.

I lay the knife down on the edge of the washbasin, and stare into the mirror above it. Not at my pale, taut face, but past it, at the reflection of her blue dressing gown, hanging behind the locked door, its folds a mute reminder of everything I want to forget.

My gaze shifts to the white porcelain of the basin, the stainless-steel plughole. When I take the plunge, they will lose that pearly, virginal gleam. Blood will pool in the depressed rim where steel meets ceramic, and if there is enough of it, should spill over into the dark drain. Will there be enough for that to happen? I have no way of knowing.

I pick up the knife again, lightly testing the blade edge against the soft pad of my thumb. It scores a rim of skin, bloodless, painless, but which will irritate me for days to come. Yes, it is sharp, it will do the job. All I need is to find the courage, to make the cut.

My mind flinches from the notion of pain.

But then there’s pain of another sort. Pain from which this new wound will bring release, redemption. I didn’t sleep well last night. They did it again, and I lay there in the acid bath of my misery as I held the pillow over my head, trying to shut out the sound of the headboard thudding on the other side of the wall. My sister, the only one who knows about my feelings for Zack, warned me it wasn’t a great idea to get emotionally entangled with one of my housemates. ‘What if he got a girlfriend and brought her home?’ she asked, while I tried to convince myself that it was me he fancied, as he knew I take three sugars in my coffee, not to mention those two incredibly deep late-night chats we’d had around the kitchen table.

How was I to know that the new girl who arrived in May was going to become the chosen one?

I even tried telling myself the warning signs were nothing, that it was a coincidence they had seen the same movie the same evening, and that she had left with him in his car the time he went to spend a weekend in the Drakensberg. Surely he was just giving her a lift. She sometimes went home for weekends, and her parents’ place was probably on the way to – and from - Shayamoya Cottage. And it worked until there came a night that I heard that soft banging, and I suddenly knew what I was hearing, and since then I’ve been burning with resentment, burning not only as I lie there sleepless, but in the empty, embittered days which follow each tortured night as I watch them and see other signs of their togetherness.

Sleep has become elusive in the past few weeks. Every night I’ve found myself lying there in the darkness awaiting the dreaded thuds, though of course they don’t always come. I can’t bear it, I loathe the thought of them alone in his room, doing it; I hate the smug unity I have started seeing at the breakfast table while my chaste, unused body aches in its futile cocoon of desire. What has she got that I lack? Why does the man I love bitterly and unendurably prefer her? It’s repugnant, it’s a slimy darkness crawling through my veins, screaming for release. And last night, as I smothered the banging headboard with the pillow over my head, I suddenly recognised the need to do the cutting. It’s the only thing that will release the suspended longing of this dormant, useless and ultimately unused body.

Thud. Thud. Thud. The echo of last night’s agony – or only the hammering of my heart? All I know is that my anguish has become too much and can only be erased in blood. Shutting my eyes, I lay the blade against my lower left arm. It feels almost warm: the flutter of a butterfly wing, a caress, perhaps even the touch of his tender finger, whispering that there is a way out.

I swipe.

The cut is two inches long. As expected, there’s a bloodless moment, and what I see isn’t gruesome gaping raw flesh, it’s a glimpse of something on the cusp of beauty, a soft fold of blush-pink, its texture silken: a fragile petal of pain. Then the blood rises in the gash, dripping onto that clean white porcelain, dribbling down to the rim where ceramic meets steel.

I turn on the tap. Water swirls silver, blends into the redness, whirling briefly in separate bands until they merge in a sunrise-coloured wash and spill away into the darkness beyond. Holding the knife tip under it, I rinse it clean.

Emerging from the bathroom, holding wadded toilet paper against the wound, I realise the agony has undergone a delicate metamorphosis - from sharp, stinging chrysalis to the unfurling wings of a dull, delicate ache. Placing the knife back in the kitchen drawer, I realise I was right. The cutting has released that seething madness within me, the resentment, the torment of rejection, and ultimately, even the burden of my hopeless virginity. For this new pain is clean, it’s healing. And though I’ll never accept the thudding on the other side of the wall, I’ve found a way to numb it, to nullify it, to erase its fearful power.

About the Competition

The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 is a distinguished event hosted by Hashtag Kalakar, celebrating the art of written expression. It gathers voices from around the globe, providing a platform for writers to share their unique perspectives and craft. This competition fosters creativity and literary excellence, honoring stories and poems that resonate with human experience.

We extend our gratitude to Wendy Greeff for sharing "Metamorphosis" with us in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. Her exploration of emotional depth and personal growth is a testament to the power of storytelling. We look forward to more of her thought-provoking narratives in the future.

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