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Eclipse of the Heart - By Senthamarai Naidoo

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Written By: Senthamarai Naidoo

Category: Poetry

Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

Senthamarai Naidoo presents "Eclipse of the Heart," a moving poetry entry in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. This heartfelt piece delves into the profound emotions surrounding loss and the enduring connection between loved ones. Through vivid imagery and poignant reflections, the poem captures the delicate interplay of life, love, and separation. Senthamarai's work invites readers to contemplate the emotional depths of familial bonds and the lasting impact of those who have departed.

About the Work

"Eclipse of the Heart" evokes a tender and melancholic mood, exploring themes of loss and remembrance. Through its vivid imagery, the poem portrays the delicate moments of a loved one's passing and the enduring warmth of their presence. The poem's gentle rhythm and heartfelt language draw readers into a reflective space, offering solace and a sense of connection across the divide of separation. Senthamarai Naidoo masterfully weaves together emotion and imagery to create a lasting impression.

Eclipse of the Heart

Original Submission by Senthamarai Naidoo

Eclipse of the Heart

We stood by your bedside,

Watching your life fade away

Into the sunset,

Like dewdrops vanishing from a petal.

How fragile that heartbeat,

Echoing into eternal peace,

While we stood selfishly

Begging you to stay

Just a moment longer ...

So we could savour your warmth

For just another moment.

But like the ebbing tide,

You took with you

The sands of life that glistened most:

Your radiant smile,

Your gentle spirit,

Your melodious laughter,

The warmth of your hugs.

The clouds will clear, Mummy,

And your guiding light will

drizzle upon us

Across the distance of separation.

Yet the eclipse of the heart

will remain

Till our journey to you is through.

by Senthamarai Naidoo

About the Competition

The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar celebrates the art of poetry and creative expression. This prestigious event invites writers from around the world to showcase their talents and explore diverse themes. Participants contribute their unique voices and perspectives, enriching the literary landscape. With a focus on creativity and originality, the competition aims to inspire and connect writers and readers alike.

Thank you, Senthamarai Naidoo, for sharing "Eclipse of the Heart" with us in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. Your poetry offers a profound exploration of love, loss, and enduring connection. We appreciate your contribution and the emotions you have so beautifully captured.

About Hashtag Kalakar

Hashtag Kalakar is a creative platform dedicated to providing artists, writers, singers and other creative talents with opportunities to showcase their work and reach wider audiences through competitions, features and creative initiatives.

 
 
 

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