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Above the Surface - By Ilhaam. K. Patel

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Written By: Ilhaam. K. Patel

Category: Poetry

Competition: Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026

Ilhaam K. Patel graces us with "Above the Surface," a poetic exploration presented as part of the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. Engaging deeply with themes of love, fear, and an internal struggle for connection, the poem invites readers into a world where emotions are both a source of nourishment and turmoil. Patel's work is a vivid reflection of the human condition, as examined within the prestigious competition that celebrates creative expression across the globe.

About the Work

"Above the Surface" by Ilhaam K. Patel delves into the complexities of desire and apprehension. The poem weaves a tapestry of emotional intensity, where the yearning for love is tempered by an overwhelming fear of vulnerability. Patel’s evocative imagery and rhythmic cadence convey the tumultuous dance between attraction and self-preservation. The piece is a compelling portrayal of the tensions that bind and repel us, urging introspection and empathy.

Above the Surface

Original Submission by Ilhaam. K. Patel

Above the Surface (08/10/2026)

By Ilhaam. K. Patel

I feast off your affection, a relief for my starvation,

its sweet on my tongue, but bitter by mention.

A drug far stronger than any herb or pill,

a high I can't escape, a prophecy I can't fulfil.

I lose all control, my senses are heightened,

my barriers don't come down, I admit, I'm frightened.

I envy those who fall into it so easily,

while I dangle above it for what feels like eternity.

I crave more than fantasies and an empty dream.

I want comfort beyond the tightly closed seam.

We are two souls with one connection,

like magnets, we can't overrule the law of attraction,

The treatment of the world has made me the angry daughter,

when my wrath burns it cannot be put out with water.

It grows and sears the skin of those who come too close,

a curse bestowed upon me which turns lovers into friends and friends into foes.

My sins swallow my sanity, ignites the fear within,

it strengthens my bones, carving names into my skin.

I want more, but I lack the courage and capacity,

so, I do nothing to attain my perfect destiny.

It seems safer to run away and hide,

than to let someone hurt my dignity and pride.

My ordeal ties my feet to the only home I know,

it traps me on the surface and stops me from sinking below.

About the Competition

The Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026 by Hashtag Kalakar is an esteemed platform that champions diverse voices in poetry and creative writing. It provides a space for writers worldwide to share their unique perspectives and showcase their artistic talents. The competition is a celebration of literary excellence and innovation, fostering a vibrant community of writers and enthusiasts.

Thank you, Ilhaam K. Patel, for sharing "Above the Surface" with us in the Global Poetry and Creative Writing Competition 2026. Your poem's poignant insight into the human psyche and the complex emotions we navigate is profoundly impactful. We appreciate your contribution to this literary celebration and look forward to your future works.

About Hashtag Kalakar

Hashtag Kalakar is a creative platform dedicated to providing artists, writers, singers and other creative talents with opportunities to showcase their work and reach wider audiences through competitions, features and creative initiatives.

 
 
 

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