Rain
- Hashtag Kalakar
- Nov 11
- 1 min read
By Zaina Haque
Like a summer day in New York,
you sneak in without ruckus–
creating a tender pitter patter
that tickles the concrete
right before cracking it open.
Splitting into a thousand liquid bullets
you strike the city–
you scream your rebellion.
To you, falling is the same as flying
and crashing down is the only path
to cutting free.
Except freedom is never absolute
when the sky has its claim
and you have your consequences.
For every escape, you return
like a ghost made of vapour,
a captive tied to invincible cuffs.
How cruel, to be controlled
by what you contest–
to defy only because it’s part of their design.
Your compliance and your calamity,
it’s all choreographed
for you to be a servant dressed as a storm.
But how magical, right?
That even in restraint,
your rain turned to thunder,
and your servitude shook the sky.
Perhaps that is your greatest rebellion–
that despite being bound,
you always refused to bow.
By Zaina Haque

Lovely poem, brings a feeling of the rainy days!
Beautiful use of analogies and metaphors. 👏
Beautifully written through the use of metaphors.
She is sounding like a deep poet who especially is not trying to be interested in this material world