Desire
- Hashtag Kalakar
- Nov 30, 2025
- 1 min read
By Sabareesh. N
I want to go beyond the ocean
To reach the lotion,
A present from God,
Only to be reached by the great lord.
I doubt if I will get it
Or if others will let me.
It is not a lotion,
The universe stopped for a motion.
I think it is a ring
Of a magical fairy,
Guarded by a strong man named Garry.
I will reach it by spring.
I doubt if I will get it
Or if others will let me.
Not a ring,
Then I heard a magical ring.
It is a chain
Of the god of the sea,
Hidden under a volcano plain,
Shining in the colour of yellow ghee.
I doubt if I will get it
Or if others will let me.
And a stop in a dark mind,
Not sure about the thing to find.
By Sabareesh. N

Very nice poem
This poem is imaginative and mysterious, taking the reader on a journey of wonder and doubt. The repeated lines show the poet’s uncertainty, while the magical images of the ocean, gods, and hidden treasures spark curiosity. A nice effort with strong imagination—keep writing and exploring new ideas
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Best bro!
Congratulations